Reviews for There's No Such Thing As A Free Ride
I Feel Possessed chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
mad fun read
ananova chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Okay, definitely not what I was expecting. I see what you mean by crack-fic. Still it was interesting, thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Ha! Fifty shades of Deeks, I'd buy that!

-Dalek Warrior
Momsa chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Oh, I need to catch up on my reading! I loved this story, just like I loved Stormy Weather. And I'm really glad to see you back here on FanFiction.
SnoopGirl69 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
That was so funny! Loved it :)
kath46 chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
it was cute and funny when you added the parts about the writers and creator...and your story Stormy weather and Kensi and Deeks perspective on it.
conservativegirl chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Interesting! I'm a little lost, but that's ok:)
Great story!
TotallyLosingIt chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Well, you totally summed up all my thoughts and complaints in under 3,000 words. And you broke the fourth wall (numerous times) while doing it! I was totally cheering when Deeks mentioned Tahoe, and the episode before when Granger sent Deeks on a "secret mission" and I am now totally convinced the writers peek into this fandom and steal ideas... In the good way. Maybe after reading this they'll learn that maiming Deeks is a GOOD thing. XD
miss-tarletone chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Very crazy and funny! I liked the part about Kensi's top, it seemed rather tight and I bet it would have been hard to breathe. Very funny!
fanficlover chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
It's a hoot. Fricking genius in hilarity. I love it. It should have been written into the show. Fifty Shades of Deeks, i'd buy that. Probably even better than his memoir - Freeks, Geeks and Deeks. Thank you.
AlWindy chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Hahaha your right this was totally crazy and I loved it! Loved the line Shane was male and Aussie haha woo aussie pride - however I'm thinking I probs shouldn't be proud our men do that :P
I also thought of your story straight away and that's some props to you because clearly your story stuck in my mind :) Imagine if the writers actually have read your story now that would be cool :D and if not well they would clearly think you have good taste :P

Thankyou for writing :)
anonkp chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I laughed and laughed and laughed all the way through this. You've so perfectly captured all of my thoughts about the decisions made by the powers that be, and how I wish things would be instead. I watched the episode tonight before reading this, and Stormy Weather immediately came to mind as soon as Deeks started talking about Tahoe. As I recently said to Sweet Lu when one of her stories seemed to be referenced in an episode (Granger sending Deeks on a secret mission that Hetty doesn't approve of), I guess imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. Thanks for the hilariousness and have a wonderful Christmas.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Brilliantly funny.
I thought of your story Stormy Weather the minute I heard Deeks mention Tahoe. Co-incidence? I don't think so! It's good to know you've got fans on the show, as well as all your fans on here.
bluechair244 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Ha. This was funny. Especially the stormy weather part. Cute
Sweet Lu chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
You are too, too good and amazingly funny. I got such a kick out of this story, especially since I am one of those writers who likes to maim Mr. Deeks. I did like the wetsuit, I have to admit and now I'm starting to feel sorry for Callen. I do completely agree that the scene of Deeks falling out of the garbage toter could have lasted a little longer. She was just about to cradle him in her arms, but no, we had to watch people running through the ship's passageways for the umpteen time.

I remember well your story, Stormy Weather and I think I will reread it to see what might have happened on last night's episode.

Merry Christmas

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