Reviews for Predator Prey
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
I absolutely love this story, especially the two different view points. I've never seen that in other stories but I love it, you wrote it so perfectly. I seem to come across this story quite often when I'm looking for something new to read and I never remember the title so I click on it somehow knowing its going to be good. Obviously I recognize it as soon as I start reading but I can't seem to stop myself from reading it again and again despite already knowing how it ends, I simply adore this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I love this one shot! I think you've perfectly captured iruka and kakashi, or at least how the seem to me! They are so well-matched for each other. I've been following your other story, Fireflies! Ever think of writing. Kakashi -viewpoint story of that same plot line? Or perhaps a chapter or two? Would love to know what he's thinking in many of those chapters! Keep up your excellent writing!

-ohmu
random2crazyness chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
i surely did love it! X3 i louve how its in 2 different perspectives! it gives the story more excitement!
J chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Very nice.
kaosugami chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Was totally mesmerized the whole time. Nice work!
miriamchan chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Oh, that was hot.
MayIGoOutSensei chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
wow! amazing story!
happychild83 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Wow. That was amazing.
Megusiq chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
Very good :) I really like this.
HokkyokuNoOokami chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Wooo what a story...

Even there is no story in it... but still...
KakaXIru worth shot...

U r so awesome Risu!
I love this oneshot
KkChibiChop chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I always love stories where Kakashi is utterly vulnerable & exposed to Iruka. Almost like Iruka holds all the power with his gentleness. So I like this story a lot. I also like how they share the same pain & both hide behind different masks and this story portrays that very well.
Cardboard Bike chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Wow, I love it! It's super cute, and I'm glad they got together in the end. Nice job on setting the pace too, with the lines getting shorter the further down you travel.