Reviews for Under Attack
OrangeSunset1701 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Great job! That was really good!
M chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Best story ever! Great job!
devilstears chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
pls continue it was good
Emzieluvsbooks chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Awesomness! I loved this, it was very emotional and caring. I loved the brother-love between Kili and Fili. Very well done, especially for your first ever Hobbit fanfiction.
A Once Told Story chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Very inspirational, very emotional and beautiful! Good work!
Tears of Eternal Darkness chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Fantastic as always. I love your Hobbit fics! -
Purestrongpoem chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Great story.
ForeverInAbyss chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Love it!
rollwithbutter chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Frowny face for what that ending sentence foreshadows! Not your fault though, it's Tolkien's ;)
Well written, the action was easy to follow and not garbled.
Only thing I noticed (and only because I just corrected myself from doing the same thing a few days ago) was to watch after a quote whether you capitalize the next word or not. "Blah blah blah." he said.
Thanks for the lovely story!
desente chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
The story just melts my heart!
Love hurt!Kili and caring!Fili :D

I really loved this story. Don't worry, I enjoyed it to the fullmost extent! :)
Gyp Dark chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Love it! Much cuteness between Fili and Kili and even little Thorin :D very good writing! I wanted to cuddle all of them to death, the poor little beans. No more hurt for Kili! And certainly no dying :O none at all. Thanks for writing this: I really enjoyed it!
Oddments and Tweaks chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Really enjoyed this! Could see it happening as a scene in the book (and the film!)
lovestory121 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This is awesome, there need to be more stories like this!
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