Reviews for Under Attack
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 6/5
i wanted to like this, but it was very confusing...i think you mixed up kili and fili's names in many places. unfortunately, that made it too jarring to read the whole thing. :(
OrangeSunset1701 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Great job! That was really good!
M chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
Best story ever! Great job!
devilstears chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
pls continue it was good
Emzieluvsbooks chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
Awesomness! I loved this, it was very emotional and caring. I loved the brother-love between Kili and Fili. Very well done, especially for your first ever Hobbit fanfiction.
A Once Told Story chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Very inspirational, very emotional and beautiful! Good work!
Tears of Eternal Darkness chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Fantastic as always. I love your Hobbit fics! -
Purestrongpoem chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Great story.
ForeverInAbyss chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Love it!
rollwithbutter chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Frowny face for what that ending sentence foreshadows! Not your fault though, it's Tolkien's ;)
Well written, the action was easy to follow and not garbled.
Only thing I noticed (and only because I just corrected myself from doing the same thing a few days ago) was to watch after a quote whether you capitalize the next word or not. "Blah blah blah." he said.
Thanks for the lovely story!
desente chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
The story just melts my heart!
Love hurt!Kili and caring!Fili :D

I really loved this story. Don't worry, I enjoyed it to the fullmost extent! :)
Gyp Dark chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Love it! Much cuteness between Fili and Kili and even little Thorin :D very good writing! I wanted to cuddle all of them to death, the poor little beans. No more hurt for Kili! And certainly no dying :O none at all. Thanks for writing this: I really enjoyed it!
Oddments and Tweaks chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Really enjoyed this! Could see it happening as a scene in the book (and the film!)
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