Reviews for Of Danish Bars and Cheesy Pick-Up Lines
crazypoet13 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
A drunk Denmark is a funny Denmark :D good job!
Maggie chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Omg XD this was hilarious. My only problem was the lack of commas. They're very important when telling a sotry. Makes it flow better. Can you do another one of these?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
Jaaaaayee 3
xXthenextbookwormXx chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Okay, so you're not the only one to do this, but it's making me nuts, so I'm gonna point it out. It's 'definitely', not 'defiantly'. Defiantly is something done in a manner going against the grain, with no remorse. Definitely is a synonym for certainly. Just so you know, and can possibly stop driving Grammar Nazis like myself bananas.
IntraSule chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
"No, because it doesn't have your number in it."

"Yes it does you should know you call me every day."
Now this-THIS- is my most favorite pick-up line fail! X'D

Now, as for your sentence structure: you might want to watch out for the run-on sentences and spelling errors.

This story made my night! :3
LatorDeLucerna chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
I want a sparkly Denmark! Alright, back to the present topic... Norge! You know you love Denmark, cheesy pick up lines and allGreat story! I loved it