Reviews for Fighting Temptation
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 3 . 9h
So she kept Edwards shirt? I didn't catch that before, but that's kind of sweet. Emmet seems to be a little disapproving of Bella, but I think he means well and I can kind of see his point talking to Rosalie about that. However I am a but upset at Rosalie for not trying to defend her friend, but to each their own. Riley seems nice now but I feel like he's going to be a bit of a problem later on in the story. I don't like Sue or Leah, but for some reason I fell Leah had been through something that gives her a reason. Seth was nice, and Sue has Charlie wrapped around her finger. I hope Charlie sees through her. Good job so far.
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 2 . 9h
I like Rosalie so far, it's nice to have her as a friend to Bella every now and then, as most people stick to the book with their relationship. Bella seems like a VERY sarcastic person, and you did a good job at the way the two interacted when they saw each other in gym. Edward seemed very surprised. So Bella has a "reputation" at school... I've gotta learn a little more about that. Good job so far.
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 1 . 9h
I was scrolling through the Twilight stories and the word teacher caught my eye. It seems like it will be a good story, you have good talent. I can tell that Bella is broke, and she's using sex and probably other things to distract herself from it. Loved the way you portrayed Edward, but I really hope that he wasn't lying when he said that he didn't sleep with women all the time like that.
Aninymouz chapter 26 . 6/30
Wow, just wow. Amazing story, it doesn't happen a lot, but your story literally made she laugh and cry,it salaam emotions rollercoaster...
Godschildtweety chapter 26 . 6/5
Great story
I love the plot and the way the story is written
Steph A15 chapter 26 . 3/13
This was an Amazing story once I started reading I couldn't stop.
nicole7049 chapter 26 . 11/26/2017
Amazing story! Couldn't stop reading it.
Futurenovelist123 chapter 26 . 11/25/2017
This story was honestly the best fan fiction I have ever read in my life. You could honestly change the characters names and where they're from and make it into a real book. I was hooked from the beginning and I couldn't put it down. You are extremely talented and I am amazed at the sincerity of this story. It was raw and deep and emotionally draining but in the best way. Cutos to you, cutos to you.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 26 . 11/23/2017
I loved this story. It was really good.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 25 . 11/22/2017
I’m in love with these two, and
don’t want to say goodbye!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 24 . 11/22/2017
I am glad Charlie killed him, but I’m sad that
there is no forgiveness. Forgiveness is more
for her than Charlie, Renee, or Victoria.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 23 . 11/22/2017
Renee and Charlie deserve to hurt...not Edward.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 22 . 11/22/2017
I think I just forgave Leah...a little bit.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 21 . 11/22/2017
I hope he gets caught red-handed...
Preferably by Charlie and BITCH-toria!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 20 . 11/22/2017
How perfectly awful that they share this bastard
in common with their families, who will choose
to believe him over a FOURTEEN year old girl!
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