|Reviews for Enigma|
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/21/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Ooh was it Neal?
| Little Blue Skye chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Amazing story here loved it _
| Mere-Brennan chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
do you watch NCIS?
| Ghostwriter chapter 12 . 3/16/2013
Awesome. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
| HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 13 . 3/16/2013
| Kou Shun'u chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
uh, isnt that a horrible plan? wouldnt that just bring the authorities over to start questioning storybrook citizens? and there is eli who knew everyone's last whereabouts.
well besides this so far qustionable ending, i like how the "real" world came to cause trouble in storybrooke. i like the change.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
personally i think it more likely that vance wins unless emma cheats.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
gee, look how much her family does not respect her by not heeding her word. clearly something serious is going on and her parents wont watch henry correctly nor did henry listen to stay away from town newcomers. thanks a lot family.
i like how she took the bike from august as compensation.
also its david not james. james is his twin brother whose identity he took over.
| Kou Shun'u chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
oooooh i really like how you are filling up those missing 10yrs of emma's life. suprisingly i dont think ive seen a ff that has done it yet.
and i liked how emma put mm in her place when she was pushing too much.
| Aod4L chapter 12 . 3/14/2013
"Marty Mcfly has nothing on this." lol
A sequel would be nice :D
| HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 12 . 3/14/2013
| fandommaniac chapter 12 . 3/13/2013
Please do a sequel! I really liked this story!
| Thayli chapter 4 . 3/13/2013
You need to work on your dialog. You have everyone speaking in the same formal, almost legal-like, manner and it doesn't sound right. Use contractions. Try saying the words outloud. Ask yourself how a charachter is feeling as their talking. If they're angry they need to sound angry. If they're sad they need to sound sad. Try listening to the dialog in the show and matching it.
| HarrylovesGinny09 chapter 11 . 2/26/2013