|Reviews for read my mind|
| scntlla chapter 1 . 1/20
Your writing is short and sweet to the point, which I love so, so much.
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Hmmm interesting! I liked it!
| Apheleia chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
[Her exploits in the Battle Subway were known across Unova, many whispered she had the potential to overpass Nuvema Town's darling, the elusive hero of Unova.] I reaaaally like this line (probably because it mentions Touko[or the less likely Touya? Aha]).
[It took several tries to convince the girl that yes, he was studio pop idol Christoph, yes, that was his Xtransciever, and that no, he wasn't gay, why the hell was that question even asked.
She answered with an airy giggle, oh, it's just you're the first guy not to look at my boobs at first glance.] love.
[Rosa probably had a horrible accident, and was stuck in a coma, waiting for true love's first kiss to save her.
Yes, this was definitely the case.
("God, you're such a drama queen, Curtis!")] stahp i like this too much already
I really like the canon progression (well, up until that last scene, lol), considering how the player actually doesn't call him (at least, I don't) and if Curtis did have a crush, he'd be worried about that. x) I like the kinda-rushed-but-it's-on-purpose style quirk that's going on. Not 100 percent sure what Hugh's doing running around saving the world (after all, that's the player's job harharhar) but hey we'll take the plot for what we can get haha. I'm not sure if that's a good reason for Rosa being "unable to do anything", though.
also I'm not really sure how the title/summary relates to the story. All I'm thinking is that "read my mind" refers to Curtis thinking that what Rosa actually wants is for him to be with her at that moment, but I'm not sure where something like "cause I don't shine, if you don't shine" comes into play.
still, super cute and so much laaaaaaaaaaaaav :)
| mossdeep chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
You described everything how it should have been described! It was adorable and epic at the same time! Tho u made Rosa seem like she's a bit pathetic when she's absolutely tough and heroic (not to correct u or anything). Either way it was a wonderful story! I'd love to hear more about them! :)
| phionexxx chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I can't stop smiling after reading this :D especially the shitty disguise bit xD
| ILikeShorts chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
I'm loving the whole BW2 Xtransceiver love story lately, and this take on it definitely didn't disappoint. :D
For me, the best bits were your characterization of Curtis as a "celebrity by day, loser blonde kid by night" (that's just gold IMO XD), your description of Nimbasa (I thought you really captured its atmosphere well), and, of course, the ending. So cute.
| sweetheartwish chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Cute story! ,