|Reviews for The Mind of a Prince|
| Electramithos chapter 8 . 6/8/2020
Good job. I think is too short, want to see more of your work.
| Prl16 chapter 8 . 1/12/2016
Oh my god, this is so amazing! Just... Wow! So concise yet so full of wonderful details. And that last scene, the mud part, that is so canon. Dende point of view is so refreshing in this storytelling of the 'three years', definitely one of the best in its category and now a personal favorite. It was awesome!
| CaptinBenny chapter 8 . 8/10/2015
So i just finished this and I can not tell you how many times I had to stop reading this, close my laptop, roll into my pillow, and squeal like a little girl. If Toriyama had ever gone into detail about HOW these two got together, I'm sure it would have happened exactly like this if not startlingly close. I absolutely love this paring and this just made it all the more sweeter. You really captured Vegeta's and Bulma's personalities and had them interact believably in any given situations. Hats off to you and I hope to read more from you soon.
| Samantha chapter 6 . 5/17/2015
The story was REALLY good up to this point. Asides from the cliche of Yamcha cheating on Bulma and being caught out by mentioning another woman's name, I think it's far-fetched to have Bulma take him back (she wouldn't throw away her dignity to take back a cheating man) and she certainly wouldn't be a virgin - especially at her age. I always feel like Vegeta and Bulma had a more sadistic start to a relationship - nasty but full of lust to begin with. Never narrowed to small biting remarks, but more intellectual.
Never the less, this story is very interesting and well written... so I wait to read more...
| Athina Blaine chapter 3 . 10/12/2014
Oh my god, this is adorable. Having Dende trying to make sense of the oddest couple ever? Brilliant. Just brilliant. XD
| Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
Interesting! Dende! Nice! I have a feeling I'm going to love this story.
Great job! Awesome plot... Love the paring for life!
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/26/2013
| makayaa chapter 8 . 7/8/2013
Oh my god...I finished it...one of the best fanfiction ever!
| LeChick chapter 8 . 5/10/2013
Oh I just loved every part of this. Great work.
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/10/2013
"Are you fucking insane?!"
"No but you're upside down."
Damn it TFS
| LeChick chapter 4 . 5/10/2013
I should be sleeping but damn it this is so good!
| LeChick chapter 2 . 5/9/2013
"Oh, now WAIT a minute..."
I don't know why that made me LOL so hard xD
I love your depiction of Popo by the way. It's surprisingly well rounded.
| Lady Kayura chapter 8 . 4/15/2013
I love this story!
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/4/2013
:D Wow. Thanks for writing this.
But I wonder, in the FUNanimation dub I think after the defeat of kid buu, Bulma shouted at the look-out, "I love you, Vegeta!" And Yamcha even answered, "Yeah, I bet you do."
Anyways, this is a really good perspective since there is no much room for bias for the couple. It is also more interesting in a way that it kinda seemed like how fans or people or even the author could talk and ANALYZE their relationship based on naturalistic observation. WAhahahaa! XD (That's nerd.) Anyways, good job on this one! ;)
| pokefan777 chapter 8 . 3/1/2013
this is the best fanfic ever. vegeta and bulma's love...it's just so beautiful, thank you so much for writing this and i look forward to reading any more of your other fanfics 3