|Reviews for Done|
| NoComparison chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Wow.. this actually made me tear up through reading it. Very, very powerfully written. I could feel every emotion Amir was feeling. I'm normally not a big fan of Amir's character in canon, actually I think Assef's more interesting than he is, but this is an absolutely beautiful piece of writing. I love how it's written in letter format, and I love how Amir is finally admitting to Baba about how much his comments have actually affected him.
Now, this may just be me, but I'm reading this as a suicide note? Is that what we're supposed to take from this? The line, "Today I ended it all." just gave me this impression. It's heartbreaking, and you really get across the emotional torment Amir is feeling.
Well done, you deserved that A you got. :) Keep on writing, you have a great talent. Stay inspired and motivated. :)
| xsweetsparkles09 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
:'( so sad :'( i think that his fathers disappointment in him and preference for Hassan kinda contributed to all that transpired... well done :D