Reviews for Awake
tentenn91 chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
OMG I'm so crying and I can't stop. I still can't believe Neji is dead and I can't deal with it. I know, he's a fictional character but still I'm so sad:( Your oneshot was so beautiful, good job.
CrazyAnimeFan1228 chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
... I'm sad now... I'm going to find a corner to cry in...
Excellent work. You truly captured Tenten's thoughts and feeling here. I can't wait to read more of your NejixTenten works.
KEEP CALM AND REST IN PEACE NEJI!
TheWriterWithWings chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Hi. I actually read this story a while ago and I found it particularly well written. I rediscovered it when someone on Twitter published it again today (under another name and after changing the names of the characters and a few little stuffs, I do hope it was with your permission). It reminded me of this story. I will catch up on the others!
Great job.
A writer who really needs to get back on fanfiction for all the great stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
i miss neji too:'(
Reknownst chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
It. was. great.

I don't cry when reading books, or watching movies, or anything. But this was a little different. While I did not cry, I could feel that emotional attachment Tenten held with Neji and was so humanly real that it had me spellbound.

The prose and realism this is done with, and again the mastery you have over Tenten's emotions and characterizations made this story beyond enjoyable.
rebecca chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
So sad, but beautifully written.
FruitySmell chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
Ouch. My heart broke a second time around as I read this. Thanks so much for writing this wonderful piece.
Kuroda Taishi chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Wow, this was superb. I don't think you've really done anything like this before and it turned out great.
Cavallo Alato chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
This was absolutely touching. I crept up this morning and searched up some Neji and Tenten, and this really touched my heart...(aka I started crying as well)
This is so well written - a really well departing for Neji, so thank you
j0lly olly chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
I just... Nejiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. I cried reading this. I can really imagine this happening to Tenten.
Lovely writing about our dear Neji.. though I can't help but hope that Kishimoto'll bring him back to life. ;_;
Kyrie Twilight chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I cried the entire time I read this. My face got so red. I had tears running down my face. I haven't yet accepted his death yet. I'm still waiting for him to be brought back to life.
tammii chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
I just read your story , and it was absolutely perfect . It really is in character , just how Tenten would act . Thank you for writing this , its really helping me accept his death , but we all know that Neji will always be with us , we'll always love him - especially Tenten .
Shadows of Tofu chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Oh my god, I'm speechless. I don't even know where to begin, I'm a little awestruck. I found myself tearing up too; I feel like I really connected with your writing. Great work, I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve.
Kunoichi-of the-Leaf chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Legit cried this entire story, but I definitely think it helped with accepting the fact that Neji died. I think it's exactly how Tenten would go through it and it was just perfect.
Nejifanforever chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Sigh... I still can't stand the idea of neji being dead... I cried too when he died... Thanks for the story... It'll help me move on...
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