Reviews for Sea monsters and mermaid princesses
xxxAmydxxx chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
this was insanely cute and i love you for writing it haha, i liked how you portrayed him to be very protective and ariel to be calm xx 3
Argin Heart chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
It was adorable! I love it!
kristy267 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Oh it was simply splendid :)

Don't worry about the darkness. There's too much fluff out there surrounding Hook/Ariel as it is, so darkness is a nice change of pace.

I liked the idea of naming the boy Peter. And naming the baby after her father was perfect.

Loved Ariel's personality. She was strong, determined, understanding, and patient all at the same time. Just the kind of woman Killian needs!

Both just made me wonder who this mermaid pirate princess would grow up to be... Who she would fall in love with, how she wanted to live her life, that sort of thing. Have you thought about writing that? The mermaid pirate princess all grown up?
kykyxstandler chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
that was beautiful loved it
Watcht0wer chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
TaurielOakenshield chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
I like that you made this more dark cause that fits Killian more:D But it was beautiful I want more 3 OMG Peter... that made me cry... but his last quote questioning my virility LOL that was funny
Superdani4Ever chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
I liked it,but now I wonder where is their kid on Storybrooke and makes me depressed :(
odetted99 chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
It was adorable! I love it!
Don't forget about your new story because I love it also!
Snow chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
This story is so cute, I hope you write more! :)
tate4eva chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
This was awesome. There aren't enough Killian/Ariel fics out there. Cant wait to read more.
Singer of Water chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
Aaaw so cute. Lol the last thing Hook says made me laugh.
TaurielOakenshield chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
This was just too cute omg XD Please write more:D
Superdani4Ever chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Dontstopbelievin chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Sorry stupid phone anyways oh my gosh that was just soo cute I know you said it was a one shot but I want more so so badly anyways really good story
dontstopbelieving123 chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Oh my gosh that was h
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