Reviews for An Unexpected Addition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I am so addicted to this story! Frodo just makes me want to hug something soft and small haha. I think your rendition of the dwarves are spot on. Thorin is how I would imagine Thorin would be if he survived the Battle of Five Armies. Fili and Kili...well I just need to remember not to drink water whenever I see their dialogue. I agree so much with your sentiment about romance. I can't name examples off the top of my head, but I see it happening all the time: a strong character becoming weak when romance is introduced into the story. I didn't ship Bilbo and Thorin before. In fact I really thought that I never would...but this story is changing my POV ahahaha. Now I can't see either of them paired with anyone else! If romance is not involved, I feel like, given the chance, Bilbo and Thorin would form a bond like Legolas and Gimli, or Frodo and Sam. Merry and Pippin, Fili, Kili...ah the list goes on! The only negative thing I feel for this story is that I just HAD to have found it at midnight before a full day of work...haha |
![]() ![]() This is one of the most heart-warming and loveliest stories I have ever read to the Hobbit and I can say, the one I like most. I will definite read it again! And despite english is not my mothert tounge and sometimes I had to struggle a bit with understanding, I really like your style of writing and your ideas and the perfect link to facts and to the Lord of the Rings-story in the end. I nearly start to cry in the end to be honest, but not only 'cause it was sad. It is a very good end. Thank you for this fine tale. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful and utterly flawless. I couldn't have asked for a better Bagginsheild family fic. You're wonderful, and I can't wait to read the drabbles! |
![]() ![]() I friggin' cried. I hate you. |
![]() ![]() Did you seriously just... make a Firefly reference? I love you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so omg! so a sadly sweet ending! it choked me up. thank you for the read. Its something i have never read before so thank you. and happy writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I. LOVE. CUPCAKES. And all the cupcakes that keep appearing throughout this story-honestly. It's like a beautiful, yummy motif. ;A; And I crack up each time, and just can't believe how much I love this story. GAH! -Crystal |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW Okay. So I kept telling myself I'd only wait to review until the end. BUT I CAN'T. I freakin' love this story so much. ;A; By far probably the best Hobbit fanfic I've read yet. BECAUSE YOU HAVE ALL THE DWARVES! GAH! ;A; And my favorite line in this chapter (AMONG MANY OTHERS)? "Fishy, fishy, fishy, fishies…" Good ol' Bofur. xD ONWARD TO THE OTHER CHAPTERS, SELF! (heart heart) -Crystal |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! This was my very first thilbo fanfic! XD You did a beautiful job! |
![]() ![]() I love how you work in stuff you know, like medical stuff and self-defense stuff |
![]() ![]() I love how you pay such careful attention to introducing the characters, how they operate, what they value/think about, and (especially) how they interact with little Frodo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh poo, and here I thought there might be a bit of a change...that maybe Kili and Fili might be enough to help keep Frodo in Middle Earth for more time... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you sooo much for your nod to Serenity/Firefly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story was cute and sweet and then the epilogue made me cry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was crying and smiling so much in the epilogue... well, all good things come to an end, right? thanks for sharing this incredible story with us! |