Yuck...

(drools)

Oh my... All those onion dwarfs are tearing me up. So beautiful️

Oh my...It shouldn’t be possible to feel a so emotional over a story!

I enjoyed this story. It was well written, and had a great amount of detail, action, and plot.

I've read this story multiple times and it's one of my faves. Love your writing style!

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...wow, this was amazing! I really like your writing style and how you bring some moments from your own life and implement them into the story! It is different from the other styles of writing that I have read, but I think it is wonderful!

So far I really like the story but I gotta knowwill KillTaurel be a couple too?

You do know the practice of using the head- and dismembered body parts- of children still occurs right? Mostly in third world countries- and its usually the people who would be rich by first world country standards who are doing it- but it happens.

oh this story is beautiful! I LOVE this idea, and the sappiness of the courtship was almost too much for me, I almost squealed!(as a 30 year old woman, squealing does not become me lol) I love you bringing in different personalities for all the dwarves, and how you made fili and kili as teen-like as you did, it was adorable! As sad as it is that the story ended so soon (comparatively, to the novels lol), I understand your viewpoints and the constraints upon your time. I do wish that different upbringing of Frodo could have changed things in the lord of the rings, but honestly this story is so beautiful I have no regrets, save that I can't copy it to enjoy many times again :) amazing job!

I loved how you portrayed Bilbo! He was feisty and not overly feminine. It was refreshing to see that because most authors portray him as feminine. It's not a bad thing but it does get a but too much. Anyways great story. The ending was a tear jerker. It was amazing!

Aww such a wonderful story though had I known the epilogue I would have skipped it all together I think...but anyway. Thanks a million for sharing, it was an awesome read !)

I will proudly write here that this brilliant story brought me to tears. You acknowledged that some characters were going to pass away eventually (as they should have way earlier), yet you added a brief period of happiness before it all ends. Great work! The detail you put into writing the events and the characters are very appreciated.

I like your Dis. And I enjoy very much the story. I was too anxious to see what happens and I did'nt stop to tell you then but you wrote beautifully the voices of Frodo and Donel and their interaction