It is very realistic and Bilbo is not feminized at all

Awwww...Very cute!

ok, so it's allmost midnight and I have to work tomorrow but I could'nt stop. Not even to say a few words. I like very much your story and your imagination and creativity. The chapter about rescuing children was very good; Thorin's demands of keeping a severed finger (gross, by the way) is a very interesting way of saying "Can I be his parent, too"
And yes, I absolutely adore the young Princes and I love Bilbo as a mother hen with them

i can see both Legolas and Gimli trying extra hard to protect Frodo and Frodo working to keep some peace between them before they split up.

i noticed the Maori and Samoans influence , wow is it really just one more chapter? darn i don't want this story to end

this is where you are wishing for a lock to put on the door

i'm thinking of Brave for the dogs and some of the few long hair cats that we've gotten from our short haired mothers

honey badgers ere kinda the skunk of Africa , their spray is pretty smelly from what i've heard

wait , skinchangers? i thought that he was the only one

well they're officially coming together as a family now.

hey , this is medical stuff that i know about , Lockjaw also known as tetanus which can lead to gangrene also known as what sleeping beauty got and was romanticized as a sleeping curse.

yup , his three beloved nephews , threatened to hurt one and you have 11 angry dwarves and one hobbit. hurt anyone of them and your dead by who ever gets to you first. even if its the gental nature hobbit

they were so wrong , they thought that gold sickness still had a hold on the king

eh , i was hoping that those ... i have no words for what i'm feeling but , i have a maternal side thats been awake for years so i see child kidnappers as some of the lowest and worst of the low unsavoury people in the world. i have no words but its probably best that i don't have those words.
i was hoping that those group wouldn't have a sliver of a chance of a painless death

heh , they don't have a clue on how much the whole company cares for Frodo.
you know , i've noticed something that several other fanfic writers might have missed but put into their writing (perhaps unknowingly) , Hobbits make a good buffer between dwarves and elves. i can see Frodo growing up and becoming an ambassador or something to the elves for the dwarves of Erabor