|Reviews for The Chronicles of The Hobbit|
| fantasyfan12341234 chapter 1 . 6/29
I love it! This is really amazing! I love this idea! Oh please please please update! I cannot wait to read some more!
I have this idea: What if the reason why Bilbo went on the adventure was because Susan left with the Dwarves in the morning?
But its just an idea :) please update soon ;)
| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 3/17
Ooohhhh Susan is eager for an adventure this time, eh? I LIKE IT! I hope we get to see where this change in attitude is from!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
It show's a lot of promise! There is spelling errors, but nothing a beta reader wouldn't catch. A little rushed, but it was done for the first chapter. Hope you add more.
| GypsyWitchBaby chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Please write more of this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
| Gigigue chapter 1 . 8/27/2014
I love the premise behind this and I wish you would continue! But there are a lot of spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes that make it hard for me to read. Also, you jumped into the plot a little too quickly for it to be meaningful. But with a good beta-reader, this could be a stellar story! :)
| tess chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
finish finish finish finish
| tess chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
hurry up and FINISH THE D_N THING
please please pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase C;
| tess chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
must...have...next...chapter...soon...please...please...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase...pppppppppppppppppppppppplllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...i'm desperate veeeeeeeeeeeery desperate
| tess chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
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| tess chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
please hurry up and finish this ppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeee
| tess chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
please hurry w/the next chapter pppppppppppllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeee
| tess chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
please hurry w/the rest of the story
| whrr.trudy chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I like it, has great potential :)
| Queen of Erebor chapter 1 . 11/24/2013