Update soon..

please update soon!

What's the status on this mate?

Okay I really like your fic, certainly this one and I hope you're able to update it later in this year (right?). I cannot wait for Naruto fighting againts the Akatsuki or even him and Inner Moka (Ura) to become girlfriend and boy friend. A once again update soon mate!

My old account was lost and I found this fan fic once again

Please finish this story... it's too good to be left like this permanently.

This has to be updated soon. I think I'm going through story withdrawal... :*

It's almost been a year! I enjoy your writing style and how you progress the relationships and story! Please come back man! ;-;

Please update soon or at least tell us if you're done with this

Please update this story again, It's awesome.

December 2013 or 2014?

What happen about updating this story it was getting better the further it went. Oh and I liked how you made two mokas instead of keeping them as one person.

It's pretty obvious that this has been abandoned, it's a shame I really liked this story.

ch14
the KurumuNeji sounds good. The Desert would kill Mizore though literally...and Gaara would most likely not do well in the home of her people either. Also it isn't a harem when Ruby would be BOTH Naruto's and Ura's subbie bitch. At best she would be a recognized mistress. In Western terms, it would be a menage le trois harems are much larger than that.

Will Tsukune have a harem? With how Outer is she wouldn't be against it considering her canon self wouldn't be (considering her personality was a copy of her mother's who allowed herself to be his second [technically third] woman). Tsukune may have to impregnate her first though.

ch4
the fact that Ura has had quite a few more years of training (including with her power sealed, which means she would have to train to have efficient movements) it is likely she would be far stronger.

ch5
the chidori hit the left side of his chest not the right

ch9
for a rival how about Kokoa or Aqua? Ruby would make a poor rival since Ura's personality would make her enter subbie modo lol

ah if forgot to mention it but might i suggest Naruto instead says "as much as I like watchning a threesome, even if it is just foreplay, we have to get to class." the line was a few chapters back but I think this would be better as a prank and Naruto wouldn't have the common sense to not go there.

wouldn't Naruto be able to channel all nine tails if Kurama takes over? the yoki doesn't cause damage to him according to chapter 1 and Kurama can obviously control his own power, so it should work.

i am curious if Naruto will become a Shinso Ghoul like Tsukune in canon. Will he then have the human modification to enhance his transformation?

ch10
from canon, Ura is stronger than Kuyou by a large margin. she only lost/drew in canon because she drastically reduced her youki to dangerous levels and thus her strength, speed, stamina, endurance, and regeneration. Tsukune was able to beat him with one blow and he was still mostly human at the time.

why is he using Kurama's chakra instead of his youki?

i would say weaker ghoul or modded human ghoul like in canon but without the Shinso blood (which would by default make him a lot weaker; still S-Class range but no longer a near immortal S/SS-Class yokai). Naruto doesn't have a clue how to use Ninshu to be able to allow Tsukune to obtain chakra thus the only way to him obtain any shinobiesque qualities is the ghoul route and even then he will be limited to tai- and buki- jutsu, and physical arts (stealth, poisons, etc.).

ch11
just realized by Ura has a really extreme reaction to Naruto's blood since she could probably climax from drinking it if she consumed enough.

ch12
if anyone tells you please tell me, preferably in an AN. Mana is one of my more liked Negima characters and Theodora is high up there as well. NaruVivi would be neat as well.