Reviews for Embracing your Inner Demon
theneutralite chapter 4 . 11/1/2013
good job dude
theneutralite chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
option 1
theneutralite chapter 2 . 11/1/2013
all these ideas are slight improvements!
theneutralite chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
epic. this is really looking up
FlordelinoDobreaJr chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Awesome story and well balance, not powerful not too weak and no harem just naruto x ura. Reading harem fict is so boring you know
Person21212 chapter 17 . 10/29/2013
I love your story. Please update soon, also do you mind if I use your two Mokas idea for my story? You probably won't see this though.
Uraharaisgod chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
What th- how is that supposed to work? Both Inner and Outer are the same individual, your basically having your two protagonists going out with the same person, please say your going to create a method for them to be separate individuals...
Crazybearfaria chapter 17 . 10/28/2013
Arrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhh DAMN IT UPDATE THIS ALREADY! I just read the entire story in one sitting and I'm buzzing for the next chapter.

Must say that I LOVE the dynamics between Naruto and Ura. Really spot on to the way I can see that relationship having to develop. Also I like the whole "nii-san" with Yukari. Again, the way I'd expect that to go.

My one criticism/ request would be to avoid the "pointless" chapters. I.E don't do TOO much on the final arc with the school festival/ Don't do like the slug boy chapter ECT. I feel that year 2 (providing you are going to do it) will be infinantly more interesting and fricking hilarious than this is already :p

Keep those flames of youth burning for writing ;)

CBF
Dregus chapter 17 . 10/26/2013
oh hell, how in the world did Deidara even get there, let alone become a school teacher there?
Dregus chapter 16 . 10/26/2013
great, now akatsuki is going to find out about Yokai academy. this is all kinds of bad.
Dregus chapter 15 . 10/26/2013
I really did enjoy Ura beating sakura like that, though I was hoping it would have been dragged out a bit more so she could have taken more of a beating. oh well.
Dregus chapter 14 . 10/26/2013
you know, some would think having a touching moment in front of someone else's graves would be strange, but considering that naruto and ura aren't human, its actually rather fitting.
Omg chapter 17 . 10/25/2013
It's Sooooo good please update
nlolDslsllz chapter 12 . 10/24/2013
Omg how does every 'naruto in a a school' story fuck this up? He's a Godddamn ninja, he's not going to ever use this stuff for a job, he can fucking cheat like a ninja is supposed to. Or did he learn absolutely nothing from the chuunin exams.
gggg chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
Why is your naruto so weak. Even canon naruto was stronger than this naruto.
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