Reviews for Embracing your Inner Demon |
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meowy1986 chapter 17 . 9/20/2013 tbh in the future like 10 chapters i still dont see a single ounce of romance happening between naruto/ura tbh she still seems to *hate* him |
SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan chapter 17 . 9/20/2013 But that was canon and this is a crossover with naruto on ... |
War Sage chapter 17 . 9/20/2013 Great chapter |
Jose19 chapter 17 . 9/20/2013 This story has really surprised me because I knew that it had the potential to be a good fic but never in my wildest dreams did I imagine that it would have over 1000 reviews. The thing I am interested is that Tsukune is getting all the love and attention from all the girls in the story, and I know that Ura is paired with Naruto but will Naruto also get attention from another monster girl in this story. |
ManlyMonk chapter 17 . 9/20/2013 Ok, I'm gonna review even though i haven't read the chapter. Based on the an and the general setting of the couple of chapters, I know that you are trying to incorporate both worlds into this. HOWEVER, Idk if this is a good thing. I've read many crossover fics that combine the entirety of two worlds, and this just creates such a cumbersome and poorly developed fic that the story is just ruined. This is, in my opinion, better than the average fic. But this road that you're taking might just put it down. Most good crosses are having 1 character move to one verse. There is maybe that 1 rare fic that can combine both just right. However, ultimately this is your fic and you should write however you want to. And if you're still going to go in this direction, I believe Lee with Kurumu would be amazing to read. That man needs some love and his eccentricness combined with Kurumu as a succubus would be hilarious. |
kazuyaminegishi chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 Another great chapter can't wait till the next update! |
OneVs100 chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 you just made my day when Deidara appeared |
dracohalo117 chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 Nice...inspires some ideas of my own... dracohalo117 |
ABitterPill chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 Deidara the Art Teacher... now that's a scary thought. Though I have some serious questions there. 1) How the heck did Akatsuki even find Youkai Academy? The bus seems to be the only way past it's barrier. 2) How did the Headmaster not know that Deidara had another agenda? 3) How did Akatsuki come up with an acceptable resume for Deidara that would be sufficient to get him hired as an Art Teacher over all other applicants to a school of monsters? 4) Shouldn't the existence of Youkai academy itself change the perspectives of Akatsuki since it challenges everything they thought they new? ANYHOW, beside that, I say that Naruto should impress Deidara in class. Challenge his view on art that isn't JUST an explosion that lasts for a single fleeting moment of beauty which makes an immediate impression, but ALSO something permanent that will last overtime for everyone to admire. He does this by setting off a series of explosions on a stone block that proceed to blast/carve/create a sculpture from the stone block (either perhaps of Deidara or more like Ura in a post that will get Naruto pummeled later). So you have both explosions in an artistic fashion, AND a lasting piece of art. I really hope you do read this. I'd like to know what you think of the idea. |
Strife666 chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 seriously akatsuki infiltrated youkai gakuen!? i won't be surprised if kisame becomes the gym teacher. |
ultima-owner chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 stalkers don't give up |
deadal chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 deidara as a art teacher... will sasori be home craft teacher (he must know of to sew and many other thing)? kakuzu as economic teacher? hidan as theology teacher? zetsu as cooking teacher (he is cannibal, isn'he) or gardener? |
Guest chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 Who cares if people get annoyed? Keep Naruto and Ura a monogamous couple, implying that Ura would settle for anything else is diminishing her character into nothing. Ruin. |
Exiled Soul Nomad chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 I agree. It was their rivalry that allowed them to push each other to become stronger and it also resulted in some very interesting combos. |
ImagineBreaker7 chapter 17 . 9/19/2013 ... Deidara is Naruto's new art teacher... I have several things to say to that. First very interesting idea, second I pity the class, third why the hell is he a teacher, and finally who is stupid enough to hire him? Ok now that that is over great work on this chapter and I can't wait to see what else will happen with Mizore. as well as what role Deidara will play. By the way is Sasori around? |