Reviews for Embracing your Inner Demon
Guest chapter 2 . 8/6/2019



Spell check/proofread
ABitterPill chapter 18 . 7/23/2019
"Temporary hiatus"

Six years later here we are.
Guest chapter 18 . 6/27/2019
I really wish you would continue this...I really enjoy reading it and seeing the dynamics between the characters
The Storm Master 567 chapter 1 . 5/24/2019
Truly thought Hinata might try to be his friend. chapter 7 . 2/2/2019
The only major problem, as in it makes me pissed off, I have with this otherwise good fanfiction is the fact that Naruto is a complete asshole to tsukune and not telling yukari to stop causing him physical and mental trauma because I'll tell you something I learned from me being my dad's punching bag as a kid... IT'S NOT FUNNY not like you'll read this anyway
Luciendar chapter 14 . 1/21/2019
Why do you keep calling the retrieval mission a failure? You wrote that Naruto actually brought him back but Sasuke escaped again. Not that Sasuke healing faster than Naruto really made any sense.
Luciendar chapter 10 . 1/21/2019
Maybe you have a reason for it, but why did you make Ura so pathetically weak. The only reason she had trouble with Kuyo in cannon was due to her giving Tsukune so much blood. Why make vampires seem so weak? Especially considering he was only a four tails. You should've come up with a way to weaken her.

You're character progression is a bit slow for me but i love this story. I'd say come up with something unique for Tsukune. You could seal the three tails into him, better than Akatsuki getting it. Or maybe have ruby train him, making him a warlock or something. My last thought would be to go a genkai route like in yuyu hakusho and turn him into a powerful psychic.
ALF0321 chapter 18 . 1/11/2019
I love this fanfic, I hope that one day you will upload the next chapter
HyperA1985 chapter 2 . 12/24/2018
I am looking forward to chapter 19 and I hope this gets rated M.
HyperA1985 chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
I am looking forward to chapter 19 and this need to be rated M.
Guest chapter 18 . 12/10/2018
5 years later and still no updates...I enjoyed this fic
Rebmul chapter 18 . 11/9/2018
I think you meant you are abandoning this story since its been 5 years since the last update
FlyAwayQ chapter 18 . 8/27/2018
This is one hell of a hiatus. Damn shame too. This story was really good.
silent blue rose chapter 18 . 7/26/2018
Shame i like this fic
The Storm Master 567 chapter 18 . 7/12/2018
See that December came and gone a good while ago my man. While sad, looks like your no longer interested in writing. Hope that changes some day, but oh well. That’s how life goes. Till the next update whenever.
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