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"Temporary hiatus"

Six years later here we are.

I really wish you would continue this...I really enjoy reading it and seeing the dynamics between the characters

Truly thought Hinata might try to be his friend.

The only major problem, as in it makes me pissed off, I have with this otherwise good fanfiction is the fact that Naruto is a complete asshole to tsukune and not telling yukari to stop causing him physical and mental trauma because I'll tell you something I learned from me being my dad's punching bag as a kid... IT'S NOT FUNNY not like you'll read this anyway

Why do you keep calling the retrieval mission a failure? You wrote that Naruto actually brought him back but Sasuke escaped again. Not that Sasuke healing faster than Naruto really made any sense.

Maybe you have a reason for it, but why did you make Ura so pathetically weak. The only reason she had trouble with Kuyo in cannon was due to her giving Tsukune so much blood. Why make vampires seem so weak? Especially considering he was only a four tails. You should've come up with a way to weaken her.

You're character progression is a bit slow for me but i love this story. I'd say come up with something unique for Tsukune. You could seal the three tails into him, better than Akatsuki getting it. Or maybe have ruby train him, making him a warlock or something. My last thought would be to go a genkai route like in yuyu hakusho and turn him into a powerful psychic.

I love this fanfic, I hope that one day you will upload the next chapter

I am looking forward to chapter 19 and I hope this gets rated M.

I am looking forward to chapter 19 and this need to be rated M.

5 years later and still no updates...I enjoyed this fic

I think you meant you are abandoning this story since its been 5 years since the last update

This is one hell of a hiatus. Damn shame too. This story was really good.

Shame i like this fic

See that December came and gone a good while ago my man. While sad, looks like your no longer interested in writing. Hope that changes some day, but oh well. That’s how life goes. Till the next update whenever.