Reviews for Embracing your Inner Demon
The Rellik chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
I think Tsukune will avoid meals with naruto for awhile.
The Flippant Writer chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
I'm gonna have to deduct points because you copped out and separated Ura and Omote from the get-go. Personally, it would've been fascinating to see how Naruto and Ura could possibly get to know eachother since Omote is the "dominant" personality. There could've been drama with Ura eventually deciding she wanted to reclaim her dominance to be with Naruto, but Omote refuses becuase she wants to be with Tsukune. Wasted potential, in my opinion.

But, I must give credit where credit is due. It's an interesting concept at least. Only a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes. If this is the path you wish to take, so be it.
Exanime Draco chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Very well written I honestly not expecting the way that you portrayed the Moka as being two separate individuals and not just personalities. I can't wait for the next chapter!
guisniperman chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Good idea with the twins, I like this story a lot, update soon.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Yeah Good idea!
ImagineBreaker7 chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
So both Moka's will be separate that's interesting I think this story sounds really good but I wonder what will happen when Omote's Rosario gets removed I look forward to your next chapter please update soon
wildsavahnah chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
great job on the chapter! i found a few spelling errors so you might want to look over the chapter. as for them being twins, i really like that idea!
NarutoTheTrueLegend chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
Too many incomplete words but other than that it was delight to read. I loved it and I am very glad that it isn't a harem.
P.S: When will you update kamui sat back? And a very Merry christmas :)
Red chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
I'm very much looking forward to this, your writing is just great, I hardly ever find myself lost in dialogue and descriptions never bore me to tears but instead give me a perfect balance of a painted picture with room for imagination to fill in on the blanks. It's a very difficult thing for authors to do, especially when they're going chapter by chapter like this but you've done it wonderfully. Waiting for the next chapter with bated breath.
ultima-owner chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
Tsukune's wallet is murdered
Shirokama chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
Twins Basil. Twins.
dch448 chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
Not bad so far. This story has a lot of potential. Can't wait to c wat u do with it. Oh and Merry Christmas!
MesoJoe chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
I like this so far. Keep up the good work!
Randomly Random Randomness chapter 2 . 12/25/2012
I definitely like the idea of inner and outer moka being twins, since you are pairing them with different people, however the only complaint I have is having them be called inner and outer for no apparent reason. While it is a good way to help people remember which one is which and it doesn't really detract from the story, I find it a bit odd.
Other than that, the story seems to be developing well.
Xivitai chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Another pathetic "Naruto goes to Youkai Academy" fic. Can you invent something more interesting than dumbass getting girls from other universe?
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