Good story and nice chapter . 1st time i see someone separating ura and omote Moka XD ,good job for ure original idea

Love the thing where Naruto teases Ura XD

Cant wait to see the next chapter

i like the idea of two seperate mokas (aka twins), I cant believe it hasnt been done before (at least as far as Ive seen)
Look forward to seeing what happens next

great chapter!

i loved that you made both inner and outer moka twins! Ura and Omote relationship makes me think of lightning and serah...awesome

intresting

Havent seen this idea done before which rather shocking actually but whatever you are doing a good job at it so far and makes things so much easier when it comes to romances update soon and merry christmas

That's right instead of outer and inner Moka being the same person I wanted to try the idea of them being twins. What do you think?

its fine just wasn't sure how it would turn out that's all

So far so ok. I'll amit a minor thing bothers me more then it should but I can move past that as long as you don't go into reasoning. But still this is a good fic and can't find anything that NEEDS improving. This is not perfect mind you but nothing needs to be fixed.

Here's a Christmas present for you

I enjoyed this chapter immensely; keep up the good work :)

-ZGS

I liked the idea keep it up...

Good. Still a few spelling errors, nothing major, but...

Why are they ura and omote if they were never one person? You should think of a valid reason for them to have those names, or just make them nicknames.

Cool chapter I did see some misspellings/missing letters but still cool.

The twin thing will be very interesting to see played out later down the line like with Alucard.

Cool chapter I did see some misspellings/missing letters but still cool.

The twin thing will be very interesting to see

This is a really good opening chapter. I really look forward to seeing how the rest of the story turns out. I hope you update soon as I'm going to be so bored over the holidays and so waiting for the next chapters for any of the stories I'm reading is like torture too cruel and mentally scarring to describe. I do have to ask two questions though. First I'm guessing there is going to be something unique about the over all relationships throughout this story. Second will there be a visit by the characters back to Konoha in addition to Naruto revealing his new status as a kitsune to everyone back home?

Loved it. Hope you update soon

I really like it! I hope to see another chapter up soon! ;)