Interesting can't wait for more

Hmm, this is definitely an original way of leaving the village. Most of the time it is completely destroyed or Naruto ''accidently'' used chakra on a sealing array he just made or had been working on it for years.

I like this new direction.

Now all I wonder is how the hell Naruto will seperate Inner and Outer. I do like the Inner more, but thats probably because I hate weak women.

Good luck writing, it looks great.

I like the way naruto leaves the village its original and not used to my knowledge. It's a good story so far so I hope you continue

I like this. Its pretty original which I like the most about it and also its a good start to a good looking story. Update soon

This seems pretty cool looking forward to how things will change when Naruto had to deal with the Akatsuki.

Quick question like the pairing of Inner Moka but is there a chance of Naruto getting Kurumu or Mizore?

nice fic