Reviews for The First, The Best, The Last
twiclare chapter 20 . 7/15
That was fun!
Fleur50 chapter 20 . 6/26
LoL
Fleur50 chapter 4 . 6/26
Wow
Fleur50 chapter 3 . 6/26
Lol
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 6/26
D├ępart canon!
petmom1213 chapter 20 . 2/27
Very sweet and really good. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Mickey
ChristyWIX chapter 20 . 2/3
This was freaking adorable. It was so fun to read their Iraq encounter at the bar. No talking just staring and silent. Then how very sexy the birthday sex was. Very hot. Her insecurity at IHOP with Edward and the waitress, only to scold herself later when she realizes what he'd been doing. Her trepidation in whether to call him or not. Finally giving into the urge and meeting him at the mall. Finding out he's Santa for the children and a pediatric doctor. The flash forward to one years later and Santa proposing to Mrs. Claus. Very good short story. Thank you for sharing your imagination. ~Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 8 . 2/3
True story, if you et brain freeze, cram your tongue to the roof of your mouth . . . pain gone just as fast as it hit. I've tried it, friends have tried it, it works.
twilightobession chapter 20 . 10/11/2015
Great story. Thanks for sharing.
twilightobession chapter 19 . 10/11/2015
Glad they are getting to know each other.
twilightobession chapter 18 . 10/11/2015
Oh how sweet of Edward
twilightobession chapter 17 . 10/11/2015
Wondering what his other engagement is?
twilightobession chapter 16 . 10/11/2015
Wondering if Emmett and Jasper happen to be friends with Edward.
twilightobession chapter 15 . 10/11/2015
Seems like Edward may have some feelings for Bella.
twilightobession chapter 14 . 10/11/2015
That was very sweet of Edward
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