|Reviews for Your Wings|
| patricia.pc chapter 1 . 3/3
Review #100! :D great story
| patricia.pc chapter 6 . 3/3
love it! really sweet ending
| patricia.pc chapter 5 . 3/2
wow, awesome chapter!
| patricia.pc chapter 4 . 3/2
I absolutely love this story :D
| Dimensional Roamer chapter 6 . 2/2
Awwwwwzies Q_O This is too cute
| solsere chapter 6 . 2/2
This is just PURE AWESOME. I love badass!Cloud and non!angsty!Cloud! Your writing style is just lovely - great characterizations, especially of Sephiroth who is pretty hard to write well!
| Sigil Dagger chapter 6 . 1/20
Love it! 3
| shiarein chapter 6 . 1/3
I keep finding myself reading this story again and again. Shows that I really love it
| Linael-Aeonsky chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Thanks for posting this beautiful story...
I love it because you gave a depth to the characters who are, in my opinion, massacred thoroughly & regularly...
I wish I can write again too... T_T
Too busy, the plot keeps slipping around my head but nothing gets conclusive... Hope you don't end up like me... _
I like your story too much...
Maybe I just have o accept I'm more of a reader than a writer, huh?
Okay, I'm ranting, sorry, But I really love it...
Please continue to write ... :3
| OddKitty chapter 6 . 11/20/2013
I enjoyed it - a nice piece of fluff with just the right dose of grittiness to make it not too sweet. There are errors in here though, which were distracting and should be looked at if you have a spare moment. As I mentioned in my previous comments, there are a number of words misused, the occasional one that was misspelled and phrases that weren't quite right.
It was also rather brief - not that that's a bad thing in any way; the pacing was good and you didn't drag out the story beyond its natural progression, but I would have enjoyed a more fleshed-out story. Things did end rather neatly with Hojo, Heidegger and even Scarlet - perhaps I'm too used to the more serious FFVII stories where obstacle after insurmountable obstacle is presented before our heroes - the threat they posed was far too easily neutralised and it would have been interesting to have some detail on how they were brought down, not just the revelation that they had been.
Overall, a light, undemanding read; very enjoyable.
| OddKitty chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
It's interesting so far but there are some words and phrases that you've used, which aren't correct.
Towards the very end when you're talking about Sephiroth's hair, you wrote "...but it had been both a statement and one of his rare concessions to futility". I think the word you were looking for was "vanity", not futility. Futility doesn't make sense.
There's another point where you wrote, "Cloud let it slid like water on a duck's feathers" - it should read, "Cloud let it SLIDE like water OFF a duck's BACK" - I've capitalised the corrections in this phrase.
These aren't the only occasions where I spotted mistakes, whether it be idioms/similes that were misquoted, words used incorrectly and/or misspelled - there were quite a few more. It always pays to take extra care when using common adages; if you're unsure of a particular phrase, Google is one of your best friends.
If you haven't the time or inclination to go back over the first chapter, then perhaps find someone willing to comb through it. The chapter would improve greatly with some editing.
Otherwise, it's a good start.
| DeanneGray chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Ahhhhh this story is fantastic, I just read the whole thing twice! Normally I don't go for AU situations, but I love how you kept our three generals in positions of power. And Cloud is a machine! With that scene with Hojo! This story definitely deserves more favourites, it's absolutely one of mine! Thanks so much for writing, you are brilliant :) xx
| Cheska chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Love love loved it!
The last chapter has to be my absolute fave; Cloud's rant about the penthouse had me cooing and at the same time laugh.
| Cidaris chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
This was great. I look forward to anything new you write, which includes new chapters to the other stories. :) Love your profile by the way, I cant help but agree completely. ;)
| Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 6 . 6/21/2013
Really adorable...This was seriously well-written. I liked the way in which you portrayed all the characters and contributed the "wings" aspect of the original Thanks for all your hard work!