|Reviews for Leaping|
| NY13 chapter 23 . 2/28
I really loved the last 3 chapters of this story and this line "Isn't it like schizophrenia?" was hilarious. Unfortunately shooting the innocent is becoming common place in the states and you took a different tack by talking about the human spirit rather than the condition that brings us here or how to prevent it. Seth's letter was very moving and heartfelt - a true reminder of love, and we need leaders who move us, we need a cause to rally around. I'm not sure the style of the first half of the story really worked with the rest. I had to really plow through to get here. Somehow in this case, the mystery, romance, stilted speech, and subterfuge didn't engage me enough to want to continue; it was my stubborness to know what happed.
| FinnMac chapter 2 . 2/24
This is your 900th review. Congratulations. Of course I can't understand why this doesn't have more. You are a goddess in the FFn world and this seems like poetry.
| FinnMac chapter 1 . 2/24
I would never leap... They both seem like mythical creatures to me.
| 2old4fanfic chapter 22 . 1/14
I had a hard time getting into the first few chapters of this story, but I trusted and went along. I know the BSA gets a bad rap, but my older son is an Eagle Scout, and has personally saved the lives of two people with his scout training, and assisted several other times. It's not a small thing
| sagsdown chapter 13 . 1/11
An amazing story that is so well written. TY
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/30/2013
I'm not quite sure how to review this story. It's grief, it's sadness, it's light, it's hope, it's joy, it is very "full" and so well written... And yet, at times I just didn't understand what was happening, or had happened, or why. I think that maybe that's just me, but yet again your writing is incredible and I am in awe of your words. Thanks yet again for sharing with us :)
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 23 . 12/10/2013
This was one of my favorite of your stories. And that's saying a lot.
I can understand why it has fewer reviews, I suppose, because of the subject matter. But it's still a shame because it was not an exploitation for one second. It was so, so beautiful and part of that beauty was the honesty of character. I felt on the verge of tears in almost every chapter.
Anyone who decided not to read this through to the end is seriously missing out on a wonderful piece of work and writing, one with a gorgeous love story right in its center. Your descriptions and turns of phrase, as always, took my breath away and made my heart beat a little faster.
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 14 . 12/10/2013
You are brilliant. That's the only answer to every question I have about you. You write with the most amazing honesty. I haven't read each of your characters. I've known them. Their reactions, their faults, their motivations, their growth, their intentions, their kindness, their anger, their reasons.
| Guest chapter 23 . 12/10/2013
The sweetest story I've read by you yet, though Roar like a Lion was pretty sweet by the end... Lovely job.
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 10 . 12/9/2013
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 6 . 12/9/2013
So sad. :(
| BelieveItOrNot chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I loved every description of the books.
The tone of this is very dreamlike, intangible, gauzy, like mist on the beach.
| TiramiSue84 chapter 5 . 12/7/2013
Every word. Every. Damn. Word. is such a bullet to the heart and throat!
| TiramiSue84 chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
Eeeeeep! Need to continue reading!
Beautiful beautiful beautiful and just... GAH!
| Heather chapter 23 . 12/6/2013
This was very touching. Thanks for sharing.