|Reviews for Heavy Metal Man|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
That was sweet and funny, and oh gosh, you literally had me laughing out loud at the bots. I rarely find writing funny enough to laugh at (a smile, usually, if it's funny,) but you had me straight up giggling. Kudos to you for writing such hilarious, but heart-felt IC observations on the science Bros.
| Alanna's modern day twin chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
Awwwwww omg that was so freaking cute and adorable and sweet. I fucking love the robots
| yamiduke13 chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
So I have never heard of trock before now and had to look it up. I swear that I will be checking that out now because I LOVE Doctor Who. This story was fantastic by the way. You did an excellent job with it.
| Prussia92 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Three words: GOOD. PROPER. MUSIC.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2014
Aww! So cute!
| Michi Noda chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I cannot believe you don't have more reviews for this story. I thought it was very cute! Love Tony/Bruce science bros. And yes, heavy metal is the best kind of music... for anything.
| natsu0027 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
You is cute w!
| Mistress of the Words chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
I absolutely LOVED this. My favorite part was when Dummy took the book because Tony was cr- sorry, having dust in his eyes. That was utterly endearing! I love Dummy! This was amazing, I thoroughly enjoyed it :)
| alessa-vulturi chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
| Lassoing the Moon chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
I agree with you on the fact that Bruce wouldn't listen to quiet music, the issues with his father would have pushed into a different direction that would help drown out the hardships going on his life. Hard core music generally does the job, I could see Bruce messing with someone by saying it sets Hulk off but I don't think he would listen to it regularly.
Your characterization of these characters is spot on and who've developed their relationship in a way that doesn't seemed forced or awkward. I strongly believe that Tony and Bruce could make a good couple, if they get past their stubbornness and actually see their feelings for one another.
Bruce was right, Tony may have qualities about him that might urk some people but his compassion and good will out weigh them. He has many things about him that make him a great person.
Now they just have to kiss and the world will be perfect
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
This was so amazingly adorable and hysterically funny and SO well written and the end made me cry!
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I loved your characterizations. Each personality was so well realized, and complex. And the bots, in particular - their voices, and their role in the story, just swept me in. There aren't enough good bot-stories out there.
I loved the conversational tone, the way it was almost stream of conciousness, and kept denying and modifying statements from falsehood to truth. The humour comes right through.
I would love to see more. Maybe a sequal to this little piece? A scene where he reveals the books importance (perhaps in public or to the whole team) would be touching and likely hilarious, since he would then have to explain what and how and why - I can just see sick/injured/emotionally compomised Tony sqeaking 'but the book! the book!' (since in his right mind it would either be left unsaid or made a joke). Or other qualities of 'more'. More bot fics, more friendship, more bromance, any of it, all of it. Your writing is so lovely and vibrant, iI have not the words.
| RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Aww how cute!
| Rejecting their Reality chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This is really good...it's a robot version of bumper cars, unfortunately without super speed. And the parental Tony was a nice touch.
| Violetrose25 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This was so perfect. Really captured Tony's personality. And I love all the soft-sided parts. The humor inserted was awesome. "flying sexual innuendo". XD