Reviews for Let's Play
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2016
i love this!
RoseJustice chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Wow. Just...Wow. That was actually rather terrifying. I like how John reacted, though...but the whole Moriarty touching John...I kinda wanted to step into the story and put a bullet in him. No one touches John! Especially not frickin Moriarty.
Gyreflight chapter 1 . 6/24/2016
This plays out so perfectly that I think it's already written itself into my head-canon as an off-screen scene.

I really like your first-person John – steady and watchful and competent, but with his own edge of unpredictable individuality that can believably attract Moriarty's fickle attention. Moriarty himself also comes across very much in character – unbalanced, terrifying in his unreason as his ruthlessness.

That first-person, present-tense perspective also very effectively adds a direct physical immediacy to the characterisation already gained through John's phrasing and observation – some of which deserve special mention in their own right:

/"Please," he says, and it's the scariest, least sincere please I've ever heard. It sounds like a death threat./

/Moriarty's voice is soft, so soft, like he's telling a story by firelight. In a dungeon. While you're chained to a wall./

Very nicely done - thanks for the read.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
englishtutor chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
This made my hair stand on end! Well done!

Favorite line: "What's the worst thing that can happen to you?" "Nothing." Perfect summary of John Watson's philosophy of life. I also appreciated the "Hitchhiker's Guide" reference. Nice one!
Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 2/5/2014
Enough to cause chills. Well done.
Fang's Fawn chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
This creeped me out. I could totally see this happening. Your Jim was spot-on. Great job!
Parluda chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
Oh, I love this!

Jim's words, while being strangled and slightly infatuated, was truly a joy to read. Both spine tingling and oh so naughty all at once. Bravo!
dana-san chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Wow. This is amazing.
Angel10242 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Interesting story. I liked it!
EmporerFabulous chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Love the inner dialog of John. Very well done on Moriarty being creepy. I liked it!
Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
Oh I loved it so much. That was eerie and beautiful yet wicked all at the same time.
goanago chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I loved your Moriarty!
mudkipz chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
That was... Amazing! Friggin' AWESOME! HOLY CRAP!11one1
Amy chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Wow, wonderful! I really liked it! Keep writing!
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