Reviews for Bloodlines
arata7kasuga chapter 10 . 6/24
Why in the world would Daphne blush around Viktor and act like that if she likes Harry? That makes zero sense.
arata7kasuga chapter 9 . 6/24
Why continue on with Lavenders POV after she bumped into Malfoy? It should have ended at that. She isn't a main character, or rather hasn't seemed like one to this point.
arata7kasuga chapter 8 . 6/24
Why cast a shield for Malfoy against a Reductor curse but not for a severing curse headed right for his face..?
arata7kasuga chapter 7 . 6/24
Ah, yeah, I forgot that Daphne used that term for a bit. She claims to be un bigoted yet still goes around calling people mudbloods just because they provoke her using silly taunts about family?
arata7kasuga chapter 5 . 6/24
A secret society that bars muggleborns membership but is not supposedly against them. Harry's dad keeping secrets from his wife. That doesn't sound very good, and definitely doesn't sound like something Harry would be all for. Why bar muggleborns completly? Is that not the exactly the same thing Daphne was saying about Harry's dislike of Slytherin? That it was illogical to judge a whole group of people off of what a few members of said group are like? That is just messed up.
arata7kasuga chapter 3 . 6/24
Harry should have thanked Daphne for the food then left after she asked why she should help him. What kind of person offers help then turns around and asks why they should help the person who they offered to help in the first place? Then Millie has to butt into his business and take his property even when he asks her not to? Neville spies on him? I sincerely hope that Harry doesn't take all of this too kindly when he finds out nor forgives them very easily.
Ilena Petrova chapter 10 . 2/17
Sadly it was never continued beyond chapter 10
Guest chapter 10 . 12/17/2017
Any chance someone can adopt this story and complete it?
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 12/11/2017
Excellent beginning!
highlander348 chapter 9 . 12/2/2017
This story sucks.
Paddybee chapter 6 . 7/29/2017
RUINED BECAUSE YOU USE PHRASES YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND!
Lovely tale until you mentioned 'kiddie gloves'! The phrase is 'kid gloves' meaning gloves made of kid leather. Kid leather (ie from an immature goat) was very thin and gave the most sensitivity, therefore to use 'kid gloves' means to handle an issue in a sensitive, delicate way.
mckertis chapter 10 . 1/3/2017
I like the overall direction, but...i dont enjoy the accents. In my opinion the focus is on the wrong things.
Guest chapter 10 . 11/18/2016
hope daphne gets gangbanged on the filfthy ship.
PoseidonPrince chapter 10 . 11/12/2016
not bad
firedawg chapter 10 . 8/7/2016
Great story, I couldn'put it down, thank you for an enjoyable read.
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