Reviews for Maka Albarn's Day Off
Guest chapter 10 . 9/9/2014
awwwwwwwwww it was sooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! _
cloe chapter 5 . 4/18/2014
She puked over soul hahahaha my god have mercy on her soul XD
retrobakon chapter 10 . 6/18/2013
That was awesome!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/15/2013
this was an amazing book cant wait to read more stories by you guys it was amazing epic and oh I feel for you with dora the explorer ugh hate that
Savannah Parker chapter 10 . 6/10/2013
Best Fan-Fiction Ever!No joke, I LOVED IT!
god damn it dipper chapter 10 . 6/9/2013
AAAAAH! THIS WAS SO CUTE! XD YAY FOR SOUL AND MAKAAAAAAA! X3
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 10 . 6/4/2013
Aw, that was so cute! I was super excited when I saw that you guys decided to write the stories on the other two couples haha. So now that this has been revealed, I must leave you with this review "I FREAKING LOVED THIS AND I'M FAVORITING THIS NOW. LIKE RIGHT NOW." as I go and investigate the promise of more stories. Mwahahaha...
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 9 . 6/4/2013
BAHAHAHAHAHAHA! wOw mAKa IS sO PIsSeD At hER fRIeNDs AnD dADdY. lOl It'S sO fREaKiNG HiLAriOuS, sOmEWHaT DiSAppOiNTinG BEcAUsE THeY oNCE AgAIn DiD NOT kISs, ChAoTiC AnD hECtIc BEcAUsE ON tOp oF HeR pAPa SHoWiNG uP hER cRAZy fRIeNDs DiD, ToO, AnD aBOvE aLL It CoULd BE nOthINg LeSs tHAn

priceless. ;)
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 8 . 6/4/2013
lol. I have a bad feeling about this Spirit thing going on here. It makes me wonder what you're up to... Should I be worried?
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 7 . 6/4/2013
lol Gotta count on Spirit to make the day a little more interesting. heh heh heh..
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 6 . 6/4/2013
Wow. Just Wow. I love it!
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 5 . 6/4/2013
ROTFLLLLL! Wow.. That was so great. Poor Soul.. And I found you! It wasn't too subtle. heh That's too funny, but Soul's gonna think she puked because she was disgusted at the thought. Aw...
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 4 . 6/4/2013
Lmao, I was laughing so hard, and had my mom and sister looking at me like I'm stupid as I am sitting in the living room on my laptop reading this. hehehehehe...
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 3 . 6/4/2013
BAHAHAHA That's great. It'd be funny if she had bought something else, but even then, It's hilarious. And I understand how you felt about the Spencer's experience. See, my band friends had gone on and on about the hats they sold in the store, and we love hats and like to wear them in the stands during Friday night football games. It's a band thing.. Well, the band went to the mall, and I was in their group, so, of course, we went to Spencer's. When I walked in I first saw the hats and costumes and stuff, and then my friends walked towards the back of the store, so I followed. And then they pointed out the penis-shaped lolly-pops to freak me out because I'm such a prude, and by closer examination, I realized everything around me. Mostly the sex toys and of course the inappropriately shaped lollypops. It was just a bit scarring. Hehe... I just realized I was ranting, so I should probably stop before I annoy you. But I loved this chapter and I like this story so far, so NowI'mgonnagosookaybye.
Emma-Kate9885 chapter 2 . 6/4/2013
Aw, that was so cute! and I'm pretty sure Soul enjoyed the view. ;)
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