Reviews for Not what I had in mind
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2016
Please Update
REBD chapter 5 . 8/9/2015
I do hope that you will write more to this i like it and hope for more. it's good and it would like to know what is going to happen next.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/2/2015
i'd like to read more of this it's well written and i would like to know what going to happen next
Shana1313 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I 3 snake eyes tunnel rat fanfiction
Raiden Uzumaki-Namikaze chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
Tomisaburo does not mean Storm Shadow, Arashikage does. Arashi is Storm and Kage means Shadow so it's literally Storm Shadow. Hebi no me means Snake-Eyes you gotta put the spaces in or it gets kinda confusing, Kimi means honorable or noble.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2014
Ahhhh! Please hurry and update! I wanna know what happens next!
Galaticx chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Actually, Tomisaburo doesn't mean Storm Shadow. That would be Arashikage. Arashi means Storm and kage means Storm. I believe Tomisaburo is a Japanese version of Thomas or the like.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Please write more. Your story is very interesting.
LittleWonders23 chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
Run from the Twins Nicky! RUN!
the phantom of the arts chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
I was about to go to sleep when I saw that you updated this and I was so happy and the chapter and all I can say is that it was awesome keep up the good work
Innocent Law chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
thank you thank you thank you! I was so happy to see you had updated this story. I was worried it had died.
Princess Hinata Bug chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
Love it. Can't wait for more.
KittyBat chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
I don't know if anyone has said anything to you yet, but Tomisaburo does not mean storm shadow. Arishi means Storm and Kage means Shadow, Tommy took his ninja name from his surname. I can't find a name meaning for Tomisaburo but I hope this helps
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
plllllllllllllllllllllllease update,or at least let someone else adopt the story!
GoldenBug Prime chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
This pretty good. There's not a lot of Snake Eyes and Tunnel Rat love stories that make ya wanna read more(even though there isn't much romance yet). I can't wait for the next chapter
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