Reviews for Not what I had in mind
toniann1313 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I 3 snake eyes tunnel rat fanfiction
Raiden Uzumaki-Namikaze chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
Tomisaburo does not mean Storm Shadow, Arashikage does. Arashi is Storm and Kage means Shadow so it's literally Storm Shadow. Hebi no me means Snake-Eyes you gotta put the spaces in or it gets kinda confusing, Kimi means honorable or noble.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2014
Ahhhh! Please hurry and update! I wanna know what happens next!
Galaticx chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Actually, Tomisaburo doesn't mean Storm Shadow. That would be Arashikage. Arashi means Storm and kage means Storm. I believe Tomisaburo is a Japanese version of Thomas or the like.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2014
Please write more. Your story is very interesting.
Roninarnia chapter 5 . 6/13/2014
Run from the Twins Nicky! RUN!
the phantom of the arts chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
I was about to go to sleep when I saw that you updated this and I was so happy and the chapter and all I can say is that it was awesome keep up the good work
Innocent Law chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
thank you thank you thank you! I was so happy to see you had updated this story. I was worried it had died.
Princess Hinata Bug chapter 4 . 6/11/2014
Love it. Can't wait for more.
KittyBat chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
I don't know if anyone has said anything to you yet, but Tomisaburo does not mean storm shadow. Arishi means Storm and Kage means Shadow, Tommy took his ninja name from his surname. I can't find a name meaning for Tomisaburo but I hope this helps
Guest chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
plllllllllllllllllllllllease update,or at least let someone else adopt the story!
GoldenBug Prime chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
This pretty good. There's not a lot of Snake Eyes and Tunnel Rat love stories that make ya wanna read more(even though there isn't much romance yet). I can't wait for the next chapter
Kiki chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
so I always loved the idea of g. becoming teens, i tried (but kinda failed) at drawing snake eyes as a teen but this story has me inspired soo much im going to redraw him. you got his personality sooo well i couldnt stop rereading,heres my link to my deviant art if you want to see( my drawings are just snake eyes, and scarlett, but i aslo love snake eyes and other pairings.)
Kiki chapter 3 . 6/29/2013
I love this! I hope you keep making new chapters ! this really made my day!
Birdroe chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
This is so adorable and awesome! I can't wait for an update! 8D
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