|Reviews for Protective Fury|
| loretta537 chapter 1 . 3/1
this is good, I hope you update it and spectacular ignorance soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Keep on going! This is really good and I want to read more
| crimsonmoon08 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Yesssss, show your BAMF side Pepper! I love it when people get protective of Tony! :D
| hypercell chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I would love to see this confrontation! Love this story
| Von chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
IM3 was great for showing the friendship between Tony and Rhodey outside of their business arrangement.
LOVED this. I was surprised by how much I enjoyed and respected Pepper being so furiously protective.
I'm intrigued by this upcoming warning scenario and wondering just how they plan to run it for maximum intimidation. By warning them against hurting Tony, they're revealing somewhat that Tony *can* be hurt that way. Which is good, I suppose, from a 'they can't avoid X if they don't know it exists'. Will they be confronted as a group or individually? What kind of threats? I adore the potential JARVIS and Pepper could manage together.
I can see the SHIELD agents considering themselves to be immune by virtue of *being* agents - well guess what? JARVIS can and will track you everywhere in the world and compromise your every mission. Thor thinks he's immune? Pepper and JARVIS both know how to play public opinion - they normally spin for minimal damage, but for Thor they could rouse a mob revolt of anti-alien hatred.
Captain America? I don't know, maybe 'adjust' history so everyone he knew and cared about goes on record as a traitor who was punished accordingly? Maybe emphasise how short his run as an actual soldier really was and how much of his mythos is based on a stage show to the public? How under-educated and ill-experienced he is to lead a super hero team in any age, let alone the modern one?
Not to mention the usual ruined credit ratings and above-board 'obviously' genuine depletion of their savings until they can either beg on the street or work as janitors for SHIELD.
As much as I enjoy exploring what real threats might look like (because for the first time, I've found a story where Pepper seems to be genuinely enraged enough to be the real deal) I admit that I'm a softy at heart and hope that some, if not all, of the Avengers come to see what Pepper and JARVIS and Rhodey know so well - and come to value him like they do.
I also hope that for all their 'closeness', Hawkeye can be capable of making his own assessments and decisions and not just blindly following his partner's loyalties. Assuming Widow *has* loyalties - the way Fury was hanging all over her in IM2.. well, she looked very closed off and uninviting of it. (I wondered if Fury was subtly getting in a dig at Tony that his PA was hishis*his*bwhahaha.)
Awesome! Hoping for more!
Especially watchful, protective, ruthless JARVIS.
And I hope Rhodey and all involved with him gets patched up too.
| Moon6Shadow chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
lol Go Pepper!
Love the pic and name by the way although it did conjure up images off Pepper and Fury going head to head, somehow I don't see Fury walking away unscathed from that one. ,)
| GirlFromNorth chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Ooooow, you avengers are in for it... Do you think you'll update this story (because I really like it)? Anyway, it goes to my favs! ;)
| iloveebfanfics chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
oh wow. love mamabear pepper ahaha. can't wait when she confronts them! does this mean pepper knows that the 'spectacular ignorance' part has already happened? or is it from her observations?
| turn2stone chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Go Pepper! :)
| Wolfjackle chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Ok, I really hope you continue this. Tony really needs some love. Thanks for writing!
| paisley15 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
*cackle* Oh yes. Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes, ohyes! I can't wait for the sequel! Or the next chapter... I can't even remember if this is finished or not. I'll check in a sec.
I was mad at everybody when I watched IM2. Not just Rhodey. I was mad at Happy and Pepper too when they dissed Tony's attempted apology after the party. Admittedly, it wasn't much of an apology but he was trying to explain, which they'd been trying to get him to do for a while.
Anyway, awesome job!
| Doni chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Nicely done. This feels 'right' for Pepper.
| YouWILLbealright chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
LOL! But not LOL cuz Peppers pissed off
| Random Person chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I really liked this. It certainly looks at things in a way I never have before. I can't wait to read more from you :)
| special agent Ali chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Nice start. Love Pepper she is the only one who seems to really love Tony. I mean granted she did try and get away a couple times but least she realizes Tony needs her. I know what Tony gone through I gone through so many friends in life its all a joke to me now. People can say stuff but we all change over time its always tough finding those who are constant and won't leave you. Pepper least seen him at his worst and still loves him and I love her for that. Love pepperony