Reviews for Last Night
Guest chapter 41 . 8/4/2015
A beautiful story, and I believe you could write a sequel with zaheer if you so choose
I loved it!
3angsty5me chapter 1 . 7/23/2015


Too edgy. Much too edgy. And my dubiety as to the use of rape as a plot point in fanfiction is immense. It always ends up being somewhere between creepy, paternalistic, demeaning, and just awkward.

-Mr. Negative
GrandAdmiral07 chapter 27 . 2/23/2015
Oh snap!
GrandAdmiral07 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
Very interested to see were this goes. I'm a huge fan of hurt/comfort and angst. As long as its done well. This looks like its going to be one of the good ones.
peeing lord chapter 41 . 12/5/2014
this almost made me pee
lol sorry
Guest chapter 41 . 11/18/2014
Hai so I know this coment is a little late but I just
Started reading this story now and I really love it and I was wondering if you could make a sexual like about korra and mako in the future like there wedding there kids and future family
LaughingSenselessly chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Your writing pulls me in. Must. Keep. Reading. And, it's a completed story? *rubs hands together* hell yes.
Ponylover5000 chapter 40 . 10/13/2014
Guest chapter 41 . 7/14/2014
this fic is too great *sobs* i love the drama also the tragedy! u speedy08 n BG-13 r the most author n co author dat could make my heart collapsing up n down :') i love most of ur fanfic toooo ;)
Vives Iwayama chapter 41 . 6/1/2014
makorraholic chapter 41 . 5/27/2014
This is so good I really love this one thong u never mentioned was birthdays so I never knew when they got older or years passed unless it said do over all this was really good
Kathy raiden chapter 41 . 12/8/2013
I really loved your fanfic. It was a new idea and new plot with makorra and violence. I'm lookin' forward for more from you
MakorraLoverAlltheway chapter 41 . 11/2/2013
I CRIED! THIS WAS SOOOOOOO AMAZING! The ending was incredibly amazing!
Twilight Woods chapter 41 . 10/28/2013
First off, I bawled my eyes out through most if this... Secondly i am so amazed... Thirdly this is the most saddest, happiest, buttkicking story I have ever read! And I absolutely love the Makkorra in this! I seriously went through a whole box of tissues when I read this! When i was done reading this, my eyes where all puffy, and teary, and my nose was bright red! I seriously ran out of tears when I read this because I cried too much! Once again, you never cease to amaze me!
Guest chapter 26 . 10/25/2013
This chapter really got to me... I love family moments like this. T.T
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