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I have to say; that was an amazing story and liked this version that didn’t deal with the usual books 6 & 7. I especially enjoyed that the end of Voldemort wasn’t the end of the story.

I won’t say much more than it was a great story that was very enjoyable.

Well done!

Ugh, Hermione needs to dump the ginger garbage disposal and find someone with an IQ higher than 50.

What a chapter! I'm still tight in my nerves and my chest! Great chapter, again. I'm glad they got both the Malfoys. My computer is trying to mess up again.

This poor kid, or should I say, these poor kids, they are really going to need the services of a really good Head Healer. Ginny can get the ball rolling, but they are going to need more. They will be stronger in the long run. I look forward to the next chapters to see how you deal with it !

What a vast level of emotions! Well balanced and held but not too much of either!
You've got the teenagers down which is often hard to do from an older person, but you have the advantage of having children to remind you! Still enjoying your writing! Thanks!

Such a good story! Thanks for sharing

The end of this chapter was very JKR cley-shay. (however it's spelled :-)

It was great reading this again. It has been years since I’ve read your older stuff, so I decided to start at the beginning and go on a kb0 binge.

Read the whole thing and genuinely enjoyed it. For a first story it is an excellent one. Of course if you compare it to your later writings I see that they are more developed but don't be too harsh on this one. Also liked the way you took the story after book 5 but I guess it is a lot easier not to be distracted when book 6&7 weren't written yet

U know its rlly stupid for wizards to target the body when fight when u can just focus on the wand, i mean now wand means no magic for almost all of magicals except of course dumblydor and voldymcnose like a simple cutting charm would've do the job after disarming the enemy and it'll also get the major problem of killing them cause they cant cast magic means theyre just muggles with dancy suits and cloak

As I understand it, the Fidelius removes ALL memories of a location, and only the people who know the secret even know of the location's existence. So, since Harry obliviated Dumbledore, how does Dumbledore know of the existence of Potter Manor?

People are using Book 7 as a proof that the room can change with people in it, but they're completing ignoring the part where Harry sent everyone OUT of the room "just for a minute" so that he could change it.

Overall I think you did amazing with this for it to be your first story, especially since this has only been edited and not rewritten. There were a few parts that felt out of character and didn't mesh well within the story. The first one being Harry's taunting of Draco Malfoy. I can't quite remember but I think this occurred when Draco was silenced. Anyway, it didn't seem like something Harry would say. The other event was Harry's temporary regression after the attack on the Burrow. It just seemed like an extreme reaction to everything. Again it didn't seem to fit Harry's personality or how he dealt with trauma. I can completely see him having some kind of breakdown but that one just didn't fit to me. At any rate, I did enjoy the story and even the eventful year after the defeat of Voldemort. I was amused with Harry's career choice after Hogwarts, especially considering his spell knowledge and abilities. Also the ending was excellent and rounded everything out well