Reviews for Harry Potter: Choices
gdecon chapter 21 . 12/14/2021
Well it's probably been too late to expect anyone to read this for a long time, but I can either get it out or quit reading right here , Without an explanation of why Draco isn't sent to a cell for asault if not attempted murder, the plot just makes no sense .
ROSAFROST chapter 20 . 11/4/2021
Absolutely love Rutger Hauer, so I'm hoping the collar comes from his movie Wedlock?!
I'm a massive Alan Rickman fan too, but I must admit to loving this Shape bashing. But...why didn't anyone ask who else was involved at the Burrow? Why did no one try using the portkeys to get to Smoldiemort?!
I'm definitely not complaining at your great ideas, and the answers might well be in the next chapters. I totally appreciate this is your first posted fivtion, so I'm not expecting an edit, but I wanted you to know that people do pay attention to your writing.
Onwards with the reading...
mysuvone chapter 33 . 9/28/2021
I so love your writing. Even when not rated XXX you still make it awesome! probably 5th time i have read it.
owl3764 chapter 34 . 9/28/2021
Great story. I missed the 2006 version during my first fan-fic reading frenzy, but this was good. From your end notes, I'm guessing the betas go far beyond spell/grammar checking; much as I'd do with my kids and others' cover letters, putting together a smoother reading résumé for them.
Thanks again for your writing and sharing that talent.
mysuvone chapter 11 . 9/26/2021
Pensive memories awesome.
RoyaleGaming1 chapter 34 . 8/20/2021
I found myself rather enjoying this fic. It was nice to see Harry and Ginny develop. I also felt there were quite a few unique elements to your story.

1 thing I loved and 1 I didn’t so much.

I love that Tonks became Harry’s godmother and helped him do what needed to be done.
To me however Voldemort’s death was rather anticlimactic. Yes they fought and there were injuries but it felt a little to easy for them to capture him. Just my opinion.

Well done on your fic
Guest chapter 9 . 8/3/2021
Hello,
Why didn't the others work out with Harry, if Tonks thought it was good for Harry to have more staying power in a fight why didn't he impress on the others that too?
Guest chapter 27 . 5/29/2021
So Ron doesn’t get zapped for having granger on his lap in the heads room?
Guest chapter 21 . 5/28/2021
Since you are NOT doing a rewrite of the books NO one should complain
HeartsGlow chapter 21 . 5/28/2021
Very odd that Draco wasn't charged by the DMLE! He SHOULD be in Azkaban!
BenignViewer chapter 10 . 4/1/2021
Small detail...
You reference Harry having his glasses put back on by Ginny while in St. Mungos in this chapter before he could see clearly, however he should still have his magical contact lenses in that tonks bought him.
jeannetaylor79 chapter 13 . 3/28/2021
Please do tell your Beta to read your work with his glasses on cause this chapter had a few boo-boos. You read it over and you will see them too.
Lila chapter 34 . 3/8/2021
Thank you so much for this beautiful story! It must have been so much works! I love their relationship, the evolution of all the personnages and the intrigue.
Just William chapter 10 . 2/28/2021
A typo, "and managed to eke out a small no", should be "and managed to eek out a small no".
Just William chapter 9 . 2/28/2021
A couple of wrong words early on in the chapter, (1) it's pendant not pendent and (2) it's lightning not lightening.
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