Reviews for The Torn Canvas 引き裂かれたキャンバス
serile chapter 12 . 7/8
That was so beautiful. Was truly a joy to read. Now to go wash my tear stained face :)
Misaki1220 chapter 1 . 2/29
this is the very first story of yours that I've read... ever since I read this i already admired your writing skills... you have the great way of catching people's heart with your story... I can feel all the emotions... compared to all sekaiichi hatsukoi fanfic authors... I'm certain you're the best among them... I know this fanfiction was written very long time ago... I'm not sure if you will be able to read this... but please continue writing... you got so much talent.. you'll go far..
Guest chapter 13 . 9/21/2015
I fell bad and good at the same time.
It is a beautiful story.
blackhorse13 chapter 13 . 6/8/2015
remarkable... truelly a master piece .. a kind of story that i will never forget... I love this story sensei... this is just too well written and I love every bit of this story... There is art in every words and scenes... that makes even a stone hearted person will softened. I love how this story touch my inner soul.. sensei.. i admit i cried a little... feeling how lonely and sad Yukina must be... Oh I cant get enough.. im glad and thank you for giving us such wonderful story... I hope you will write more sensei...
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 12 . 5/2/2015
Spent the last few chapters of this story reading though my tears. I was hoping that it would have a happy ending and never in a million years would I have predicted things to end the way they did. The plot for this story would make a really good book.
KeiKeiKei chapter 13 . 3/13/2015
Damn! You nailed it! Wooo! i praise you with my knees on the floor, bowed down and hands up!

This is the best... arigatou!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/31/2014
Hello! This is like the BEST KisaXYukina I have ever read! I love this so much! The feels, the mystery,the ... smut... XDD THANK GOD YOU WERE BORN AND THAT YOU WRONG THIS! THIS IS THE BEST OKAY? THE BEST! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS! XDDD YOU ALSO HAVE A NICE PLOT AND I CAN SEE THAT YOU KNOW HOW TO PLAS THINGS OUT! YOU ARE AWESOME!
Ann chapter 13 . 7/30/2014
You my dear just made me cry! This fanfic was great! Amazing I loved it! You have to write a sequel or something more about this twos please!
Kunohichi8 chapter 13 . 6/22/2014
Beautiful!
Marble chapter 12 . 6/7/2014
What a long and painful tale you have...
The ending was different from what I have imagined, but it was fine. Though, that ending kind of creeps me out. Hah...but why do you always have to make Yukina the bad guy lol
Junk chapter 4 . 6/6/2014
Hahaha! I only read four chapters, but I am already hooked up! ;) Nice story plot you got!
Kasumi-chan19 chapter 13 . 3/30/2014
Okay, okay, I just HAVE to tell you this:
YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY THE BEST FANFICTION AUTHOR EVER! :P Break Down and this story, The Torn Canvas, are my absolute favourite fanfics! I have reread these stories more times than I can count, and they both made me cry so much! DX All your stories are so well written, the plots are amazing, great suspense, and I have so much more to say but I don't want to make this too long. XD

What I'm trying to say is that I am seriously in love with your stories and you HAVE HAVE HAVE TO keep on writing! :DDDD
SweetStarsSama chapter 13 . 3/16/2014
This. Is...

This was genius! With such a twisted ending, mmm I love it!
It's better written than most books I read! The plot. Wooooooaaah. It's blowing my mind!

Ahh. Now I finished it... I feel empty inside...
; w ;
Guest chapter 13 . 3/12/2014
One word. Beautiful. The story's plot was fantastic. I came to love the characters even more. Really, I thought after Kisa vanishing, there would be no more tears for me to cry but that sakura tree scene brought them back with a vengeance. (I'm sniffing while writing these. I'm pressing the backspace button more than necessary because I can't still type properly. Damn them eyes!) The ending was so perfect. It was not what I expected, yes, but I think it was all for the best. There were a errors here and there, grammar mishaps, and spelling mistakes, but I am gladly ignoring them because I adored this story so much. Good job!
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