Reviews for Sanctuary
Firehedgehog chapter 6 . 4/17
niiiice
heartbreakerninja chapter 5 . 1/5
Will there ever be a revival for this story? Its really good and I'm super curious what Jamie's take on the mutations would be.

The mutations themselves were a very logical choice for this story to with. It fits the storys backstory. I'm not one to believe everything revolves around evolution but Darwin was in the righ teack with his survival of the fittest idea. If set with a new environment any species (human or otherwise ) will adapt to be better able to handle said environment. If have short and tall flightless Birds on an island with very tall trees you can bet that the next generation is goinf to be mostly made up of the taller flightless Birds. Same with humans. If its warmer and sunnier and hot 95% of the time you'll get darker skin tones and lighter colored furry animals. So it can be concluded that given enough time humans in a magically saturated environment with or with out the radiation would develope some kind of mutation to fit their new needs.

Great job so far would love to read more :)
Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2015
This is perfect. I can't log in, but the minute I'm able, the /second/ I'm able, I'm following and favoriting this story. I REALLY want to write a crap ton of stuff telling you how much I love it and want to see more of it, but I... can't...

WELP I'M OFF TO GO LOOK AT MORE OF YOUR WORKS BECAUSE I FREAKING LOVE YOU (platonically) :D
Guest chapter 6 . 11/29/2015
I love the story. Will you be finishing it?
SlowMercury chapter 6 . 8/12/2015
I really like the idea of the Great Spirits as arks for the world's future. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
sarafine-ecleips chapter 6 . 5/12/2015
I /love/ this story. Just how horrible but amazing people are, Jack saved the /entire/ human race!
vampireharry the 2 chapter 6 . 1/23/2015
This is absolutely fascinating! I hope for more!
TheEpicDuck123 chapter 6 . 1/28/2014
Oh my god I'm hooked. I can picture EVERYTHING which I'm still not sure if it's good or bad. You know what? I'll just add you to my favorite author's list anyway. It was bound to happen. I need an update on this one definitely. I think you altered my way of thinking
AyameKitsune chapter 6 . 9/10/2013
This is so awesome! More please!
paracuties chapter 6 . 8/18/2013
Awww! I finally get around to reading this chapter, but then-I realize it hasn't been updated in months. -_- Well. It's really good, though, and I really like the whole idea and totally original stuff in it, but you're not updating! Urgh. Well keep writing, even if it's not for this!
heartbreakerninja chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
hi again :) just me again saying that i REALLY wanna know what happens next :) cause like i've said for all of your others this is an awesome story and i really gotta know what happens next
Lolxxx chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
Oh no you don't, young man/lady. I will not allow you to leave this story unfinished! It's so fabulous that idk how you can leave it as it is. Please continue !
Wenxi chapter 6 . 5/10/2013
Brilliant idea. I love how everyone's adapted to deal with the circumstances they're living in, and the world building is wonderful too. A nice look at nuclear war in the Guardian universe.
Magyk Knight chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
Very nice
Sheeijan chapter 6 . 4/3/2013
Wow, you sure did take the premise of this story and turn it into something dark and sad and intense. No happy fluffy hoppity hop googies here... But it's really different and an intense read for sure. Unfortunately too realistic. I love that Pitch is having to atone for his mistake, and that Jack is the one to have initially saved the humans. His love for the Jamie, and his family... Such a special bond. Although being called Lord Frost must make him practically break out in hives!
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