Reviews for Naughty not nice
hey chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Hmm... I think you need a beta. You keep switching from third person to first to second, it gets kind of annoying. I like the story though, just look over what you write and try to edit and correct grammar.

Byee
Dogeye14 chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Wow that was really good and this is my first time reading bleach well done
Kurosaki's theone chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Indeed, best one night stand EVER!
Adultswim12 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
this was awsome! favorite ! lol
LoLo326 chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I loved the story!
ZarameJake chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
yay! good for you shiro though i do wish there was more. great job _
GothicOokami chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Loved it, so far my favorite Christmas story. I kept re-reading it since you posted it. Going to go hide now from guests from family, but taking iPod with me. xD Again, loved it.