Reviews for Drabbles and Omakes
Syaosyaofeather chapter 16 . 2/14
Oh dear lord this is so funny. I specially loved the chapter of hazelnut in syaoran' spoilt of view, it is so good to read what he though in those situation!
Thank for writing this, it was a lot of fun to read. I would totally love to read more of this little Drabble or even better to continue to read hazelnut
I love you writing style.
SmileRen chapter 16 . 4/25/2013
I feel sorry for the guy but he kinda had that coming T_T;;
SmileRen chapter 14 . 3/30/2013
That was brilliant! -laughs evilly-
lonely white cloud chapter 12 . 1/24/2013
Mokona fainted lol
lonely white cloud chapter 10 . 1/11/2013
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lonely white cloud chapter 9 . 1/7/2013
poor Syaoran Is someone rape him?
Purple Parakeet chapter 9 . 1/7/2013
I'm back So wait... did I understand correctly that Syaoran kinda lost it and then killed his attackers that gruesomely? I don't remember that happening in the other fic...
you were right btw, I liked it. you're getting good at this dark stuff ya know ;)
lonely white cloud chapter 8 . 1/1/2013
... nothing to say...
feel sorry to syaoran...
write more please...
kuroXIII chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
XD

Fei Wang... Such a creeper

The part that made me laugh the most was Tsubasa being able to cringe even with all the spells confiding him. :)
lonely white cloud chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
More KuroFai! I need more sadist!Kurogane! Rope, ribbon, bound, ANYTHING! More please!
Sadist!Kuro is cool!
kuroXIII chapter 6 . 12/27/2012
XD
And Touya accuses Tsubasa of corrupting his sister...
kuroXIII chapter 5 . 12/25/2012
Aw This is pretty cute. Is this from Tsubasa's past to the present?
kuroXIII chapter 3 . 12/24/2012
Oh my. I was always interested as to what will happen afterwards and I'm surprised that they managed to sort of compromise with each other. Of course, Tsubasa still doesn't have a lot of power over his clone, only able to bargain whether he'll be willing or not.
Ha, I bet the person who gave Tsubasa the chocolate didn't expect this to happen. :)

Btw, I think there is a few errors in this fic.

"After that the clone showed up with different foods more often. If he cooperated willingly after eating he would get something special again next day, if he stayed still without responding he would get just rice for three days."

-I think there should be a comma after "eating", a period after "next day", and a comma after "responding". This sentence was kinda long and I felt like it could be separated into two comparison sentences.

Btw, for the fingernails part, did you imply that his nails had grown long again even though Syaoran clipped them? I had to read that part a few times because it seemed a little off, but that could just be me.
kuroXIII chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
Yay! I'm glad you went through with this project! It was pretty fun to read how Tsubasa is still obviously in love with his Sakura, but can still appreciate his mirrior counterparts. :)

I'm not going to say much in this review cause I just went to the eye doctor so everything is kinda blurry, but I look forward to more of your drabbles! Maybe one between father!Syaoran and Tsubasa?
Darkchibi-chan chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
Wai! Your alive! :D Ahaha, just joking XD Cute little drabble you did there! XD Tsubasa is such a pervert

I have a requuuuuest! Do a little drabble or oneshot or something of the continuation of Chocolate! :DDDD