Reviews for Fallen
kandita chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
Please I am begging u to update. But, it's going to be tough for them. But, am almost certain the the Uhicha can be equally and even more terrifying when it comes to someone trying to harm one if their own. So, I'm sure that the Hyuga will think long and hard before they cross that path
kandita chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
This had me cracking up the whole time. Mikoto is just too damn funny...as for Fugaku, Itachi, and Sasuke Mikoto has them all whipped. And, I'm loving it

The last part is really sad. I hope that she will fulfill her dying dad wish and become heir like she is suppose to be. She can have both her love n her life
kandita chapter 5 . 1/19/2014
This pink hair bi*ch had the nerves to show up at her house and tell her that! Oh the balls she have! I hope Hinata will not be the idiot that she is and listen to her
kandita chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
I really like his family:) his mom is a riot
springmind chapter 9 . 8/14/2013
Kyaaaaaa... this story is AWESOME. i LOVE this story so much. Even though it only have 9 chapter but i seriously enjoy reading this story. U such a good writer. i can understand every single word that you used in this story. N when i read this story it was just like it's happening in front of me, how they dress how they look like how it happen n everything. Thank u so much gore serving me this such a Awesome story. i seriously enjoy reading this story. Once again thank u so much
lightxdark chapter 2 . 2/27/2013
It says that Sakura is Naruto's assistant. I'm pretty sure it would be Sakura as a Doctor and Naruto as her assistant. 1) Sakura is the medic in the original Naruto series. 2) This gives in to the stereotype that doctors should be male in a story. -Other than that, this is a very nice story.
chancharan chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
A little OOC. Could use a little more research. Good for light reading.
hpnarutardsjedipirate1234 chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
Haha, glad you liked my icon thingy... and also the fact that you missed me 3 and of course i am sticking up with the sequel... am going to try and draw that sasuke looking at sleeping hinata and hinata looking at sleeping sasuke... nice story and nice ending .
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But we all know its just the beginning ;)
usa chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
Isn't it too early to end the fiction? Well, I expected this fic will be longer :(.. Btw can you do a sequel for me?:D
Saki-Hime chapter 9 . 1/14/2013
That was great, can't wait for the sequel.
KaoruZhinLee chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
I do the love the ending after I found out there's gonna be a sequel. I'm glad Hina finally decided to Sasuke a chance.
The Impossible Dreamer chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
This chapter was really great, it definitely left me wanting much more. Thank you so much for the enjoyable read!

P.S. Are you going to continue your other story "Semblance of Regret"? I really like that story as well.
NaviTheGoddess chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
I like your story. The problem I had it was too short, and it need bit more to develop. It felt rush the ending.

However, I like it. I can't wait for your next story.
umnia chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
i think it was absolutely fascinated fic , well done
25ShadesOfFebruary chapter 9 . 1/13/2013
I enjoy this story very much and i love the ending. I do want to read your next story sounds very interesting
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