| Reviews for All Was Not Well |
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   LadyRainDancer chapter 6 . 3/26/2017 Excellent story :) |
| FlowersBite chapter 6 . 3/11/2017 Very different from other time travel stories, I enjoyed it very much. |
| noreenklose chapter 6 . 3/9/2017 I loved it! Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing. |
| johnjohnho chapter 6 . 3/5/2017 I will not favorite this. While this was a nice story, there is zero suspense or drama, it's boring. Everything goes his ways with no opposition. The second reason I read this is Harry/OC pairing, but that ended up being just as a dry romance. This could maybe work as Humor, because of the lack of any adventure or action or romance. |
| Celeste Verteidiger chapter 6 . 2/20/2017 This is amazing. It was short but it got all the important parts. I LOVE IT! |
| dead feather chapter 6 . 1/24/2017 The ending was nice to know but the whole Rhapsody seemed ... futile and summarized. Better to have cit it where it was good |
| Linda chapter 6 . 1/4/2017 Love the story |
| cincinnatus18 chapter 3 . 12/24/2016 Seeing the 'unborn child' I screamed "DELPHI" until I realised this was published in 2012... but still that's some great foresight right there XD |
| juliethobert chapter 6 . 11/29/2016 Very enjoyable. Thank you. |
| Montara chapter 6 . 11/29/2016 Interesting take on the Deathly Hallows and the power Harry now has. I wonder if he's immortal now? I read once a story where he was immortal because of the Master of Death thing. I liked the world he created by coming back. Thanks for sharing! |
| MrsH chapter 6 . 11/27/2016 Thank you for sharing your unusual time-travel story. I enjoyed it very much. Rather than nit pick over some typos and grammar errors, I would like to leave you with one suggestion for future writing: please consider telling a little more of the story, rather than condensing it so much. I wanted more information on some of the sections, and 20 chapters and 50,000 or so words might have created a stronger narrative. Thank you again for sharing your talent and your imagination! |
| AshesGleamandGlow chapter 6 . 11/28/2016 good stuff! |
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 11/25/2016 The problem with this chapter? Harry learns he was given a love potion and doesn't bother to check if the same happened to Hermione. |
| BookNerd1947 chapter 6 . 11/18/2016 I absolutely love your writing and use of logic and common sense. The only thing about your writing that I'm not a great fan of it that when you write people in love or them talking about relationships it seems very forced and unemotional. To me personally, I like a nice romance where there is chemistry and more emotion. I really believe you should work on writing romantic relationships but other than that, superb job. |
| nintschibintschi chapter 4 . 11/15/2016 just love this story thanks nintschi |