Reviews for All Was Not Well
LadyRainDancer chapter 6 . 3/26/2017
Excellent story :)
FlowersBite chapter 6 . 3/11/2017
Very different from other time travel stories, I enjoyed it very much.
noreenklose chapter 6 . 3/9/2017
I loved it!
Excellent story.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for writing.
johnjohnho chapter 6 . 3/5/2017
I will not favorite this. While this was a nice story, there is zero suspense or drama, it's boring. Everything goes his ways with no opposition. The second reason I read this is Harry/OC pairing, but that ended up being just as a dry romance.

This could maybe work as Humor, because of the lack of any adventure or action or romance.
Celeste Verteidiger chapter 6 . 2/20/2017
This is amazing. It was short but it got all the important parts. I LOVE IT!
dead feather chapter 6 . 1/24/2017
The ending was nice to know but the whole Rhapsody seemed ... futile and summarized. Better to have cit it where it was good
Linda chapter 6 . 1/4/2017
Love the story
cincinnatus18 chapter 3 . 12/24/2016
Seeing the 'unborn child' I screamed "DELPHI" until I realised this was published in 2012... but still that's some great foresight right there XD
juliethobert chapter 6 . 11/29/2016
Very enjoyable. Thank you.
Montara chapter 6 . 11/29/2016
Interesting take on the Deathly Hallows and the power Harry now has. I wonder if he's immortal now? I read once a story where he was immortal because of the Master of Death thing.

I liked the world he created by coming back.

Thanks for sharing!
MrsH chapter 6 . 11/27/2016
Thank you for sharing your unusual time-travel story. I enjoyed it very much. Rather than nit pick over some typos and grammar errors, I would like to leave you with one suggestion for future writing: please consider telling a little more of the story, rather than condensing it so much. I wanted more information on some of the sections, and 20 chapters and 50,000 or so words might have created a stronger narrative.

Thank you again for sharing your talent and your imagination!
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 6 . 11/28/2016
good stuff!
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
The problem with this chapter? Harry learns he was given a love potion and doesn't bother to check if the same happened to Hermione.
BookNerd1947 chapter 6 . 11/18/2016
I absolutely love your writing and use of logic and common sense. The only thing about your writing that I'm not a great fan of it that when you write people in love or them talking about relationships it seems very forced and unemotional. To me personally, I like a nice romance where there is chemistry and more emotion. I really believe you should work on writing romantic relationships but other than that, superb job.
nintschibintschi chapter 4 . 11/15/2016
just love this story thanks
nintschi
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