Reviews for All Was Not Well
Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2016
Wonderful! That was a neat, tidy and conclusive time travel Fanfiction that made the British wizards game world simpler. I wish there was more Fanfictions like this one. Great job on writing this, it was an awesome read.
uwishuwerecool chapter 6 . 4/28/2016
DeiStarr chapter 6 . 4/28/2016
This is a very well-written time-travel fic. It manged to be fresh and original in a frequently-used premise - not to mention that it managed to achieve a "Happily-Ever-After" and "Everybody-Lives" ending without being ridiculously unbelievable.

I really loved it - very well-done and interesting!
MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 6 . 4/22/2016
At certain times one word is all that is needed at that word is: BRILLIANT! - Snake
missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 3/31/2016
Okay ... Are there two of the Peverell invisibility cloak in this time? Harry is using it, and James must also have it, as well. What happens if James sees Harry using the Peverell cloak? Will he be able to tell that it is the same cloak? In the books, it has been described as unique among invisibility cloaks in that its protection never wears out, among other things. It must look and feel different from them.

Why was Minister Bagnold unwilling to check for the Mark? Is she (or someone near her) a Death Eater? Crouch is proving uncharacteristically competent and proactive this time around. What changed him by the time Sirius was apprehended that he would toss him into Azkaban without a trial? Or did he buckle under pressure from Dumbledore and Bagnold? His son had not yet been discovered to be a DE until a few days later, so that wasn't it. Hmmm ...
mab70 chapter 6 . 3/28/2016
Well done!
Very enjoyable story!
Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 3/19/2016
A bit sad you didnt give more dialog of the dinner with Lily and James.
Squarekiddo chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
But if he went back in time how could he have left a message? or was that simply for some drama?
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Odd though that a Harry knowing he had been under potions doesn't consider if Hermione is. Even if he feels nothing romantic for her, you would think he's want her free of them, due to their friendship.

Also, he have the basic time travel question; if you go back, do you change what has been, or do you simply create another reality? Can you tell? Would it make a difference?

Corwyn chapter 6 . 2/23/2016
Beautiful story! You're right, this was a unique take on the situation.
nikkiRiddle chapter 6 . 2/24/2016
Loving it
bkerrmom1 chapter 6 . 2/23/2016
Love the story! Absolutely like the way you worked the going back in time angle.
crazzyredhead chapter 6 . 2/14/2016
lol james is a grandfather... lol keep up the amazing stories love them
Guest chapter 6 . 1/24/2016
Cool story, but seemed awfully familiar. It took me a while to recall where I'd seen it before.

If you haven't already seen them you may want to take a look at "A Brand New Start" and its sequel, "This Time The Potters," by fairywm. Both stories are pretty good actually, though much darker in tone than yours, which was posted a couple of years earlier. ;-)

While many of the gory details are certainly different, the overall plotline (MoD is fed up so takes his money and "goes back," assumes a false identity, invests in businesses, eliminates horcruxes/DEs/Voldemort, ...) is remarkably similar to this wonderful story of yours.
jpspring chapter 6 . 1/15/2016
Thanks for a wonderful story. :)
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