Reviews for All Was Not Well |
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![]() ![]() The unplanned meeting with James was rather well done, and it was fun to see Harry suddenly thrown into encounters with his parents. Too bad he was 'woolgathering' instead of interacting with his folks... though that might be tough dialogue to write. |
![]() ![]() This looks fun! I like the concept (from the description) and am looking forward to your proactive, no-holds-barred hero. |
![]() ![]() For Time travel, Harry could just toss the Soul pieces into the vale of death. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since Hermione read the letter does that mean Harry created a new timeline/reality without collapsing the old one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really good story. I don't read many where Harry goes back to his parents time as himself. Mostly I keep to do-over fics. However this was definitely an enjoyable piece. I really like how Harry realized that things weren't going to get better without major change that just wasn't possible in his time,. At least without him becoming his own version of a dark lord. His plan was well executed and I liked that his name wasn't really different. I also really liked how he worked within the law. That's not something I see often, but really enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the concept but it's so damn short it's basically a one shot and the relationship between Harry and Rhapsody is so silly it's pointless we don't get to see a relationship grow overtime instead it's dropped into our laps like this This story should of been like 40 Chapters long it reads more like a concept piece rather than a actual story |
![]() ![]() ![]() honestly voldemort could have been smarter and not used a visible mark made his horcruxes well known objects instead of like, a grain of sand in the desert lol If Voldemort decided to sneak into the castle in disguise and let the beast free or set it to kill Dumbledore, why he hadn't done that before was beyond Hadrian honestly, he would gain a lethal weapon. for real. it would have been so nice if he gobbled up dumbledbitch |
![]() ![]() I'm surprised Harry didn't consider blowing up the ministry of Wizengamot to get rid of darker purebloods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great time travel story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A solid story, and I loved that you paid attention to finance. War/terrorism requires crazy amount of capital to make it work. |
![]() ![]() Second time I've read this and enjoyed it just as much as the first time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i forgot to write a review because i was busy smiling while reading it. also because this story is perfect in my opinion. it only has 6 chapters but you wrote it brilliantly well. one of my favourite time travel harry so far! definitely 6/5 stars |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() So now Harry's revision timetable consisted of Charms, Defence Against the Dark Arts, Arithmancy, Potions, Transfiguration, Herbology, Care of Magical Creatures and Muggle Studies. That would give him eight NEWTs, a really high number that would open many doors. why not Ancient Runes? |
![]() ![]() The bit about Severus makes me sad. |