Reviews for All Was Not Well
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2022
The unplanned meeting with James was rather well done, and it was fun to see Harry suddenly thrown into encounters with his parents. Too bad he was 'woolgathering' instead of interacting with his folks... though that might be tough dialogue to write.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2022
This looks fun! I like the concept (from the description) and am looking forward to your proactive, no-holds-barred hero.
OLD Guy chapter 1 . 6/24/2022
For Time travel, Harry could just toss the Soul pieces into the vale of death.
gabzep chapter 1 . 6/4/2022
Since Hermione read the letter does that mean Harry created a new timeline/reality without collapsing the old one?
Darknessdawns chapter 6 . 5/16/2022
This was a really good story. I don't read many where Harry goes back to his parents time as himself. Mostly I keep to do-over fics. However this was definitely an enjoyable piece. I really like how Harry realized that things weren't going to get better without major change that just wasn't possible in his time,. At least without him becoming his own version of a dark lord. His plan was well executed and I liked that his name wasn't really different. I also really liked how he worked within the law. That's not something I see often, but really enjoyed. Thank you for taking the time to write and share this.
Devilking1994 chapter 5 . 5/4/2022
I really liked the concept but it's so damn short it's basically a one shot and the relationship between Harry and Rhapsody is so silly it's pointless we don't get to see a relationship grow overtime instead it's dropped into our laps like this

This story should of been like 40 Chapters long it reads more like a concept piece rather than a actual story
yochan123 chapter 2 . 4/22/2022
honestly voldemort could have been smarter and not used a visible mark made his horcruxes well known objects instead of like, a grain of sand in the desert lol

If Voldemort decided to sneak into the castle in disguise and let the beast free or set it to kill Dumbledore, why he hadn't done that before was beyond Hadrian honestly, he would gain a lethal weapon.
for real. it would have been so nice if he gobbled up dumbledbitch
97531 chapter 1 . 4/15/2022
I'm surprised Harry didn't consider blowing up the ministry of Wizengamot to get rid of darker purebloods.
Chalayne chapter 6 . 4/15/2022
Great time travel story!
ja3419 chapter 6 . 4/14/2022
A solid story, and I loved that you paid attention to finance. War/terrorism requires crazy amount of capital to make it work.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2022
Second time I've read this and enjoyed it just as much as the first time.
bibliopuff chapter 6 . 4/9/2022
i forgot to write a review because i was busy smiling while reading it. also because this story is perfect in my opinion. it only has 6 chapters but you wrote it brilliantly well. one of my favourite time travel harry so far! definitely 6/5 stars
lady sakura cosmos chapter 6 . 3/16/2022
Good story
TrumpasaurusRex chapter 1 . 3/11/2022
So now Harry's revision timetable consisted of Charms, Defence Against the Dark Arts, Arithmancy, Potions, Transfiguration, Herbology, Care of Magical Creatures and Muggle Studies. That would give him eight NEWTs, a really high number that would open many doors.

why not Ancient Runes?
Guest chapter 5 . 2/24/2022
The bit about Severus makes me sad.
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