Reviews for All Was Not Well
TwipTwup chapter 6 . 10/31/2018
Loved it!
noylj chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
So, will Harry be in the same world, with the future of the universe disappearing, or an alternate universe, thus leaving that future in the hands of purebloods?
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2018
Rereading this old story and it suddenly dawned on me, that Harry never considered that if HE was being potioned, than why not Hermione?

Barring going on actual dates and going at it like rabbits, the two might've well been in a romantic relationship with each other. They sure as heck acted like an old married couple, fully in tune with each other.

Not as if Harry has any true concept of what love is, the varying types etc, considering his "childhood". And Hermione isn't exactly Miss Confidence, when it comes to her looks, so the idea that Harry night fancy her, would never occur to her.

So why potion Hermione as well?
To keep them separate and Molly needs the help to get Ron to do things as well. ;-P

Plus, fresh infusion of blood to counteract squibbing.

Not that he would've been able to help her considering that marriage law. Going back and making alterations to the root scenario could allow his younger self to hook up with Hermione.
Lord Cartwright chapter 6 . 9/20/2018
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 6 . 9/11/2018
This be awesome. Happy as hell I read it.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 1 . 9/11/2018
Yaaaaaaaaasssssssssss boi! Do that shit!
LeinadDjo chapter 6 . 8/26/2018
Wow! Very different and good time-travel fic. Thanks for writing and sharing!
ROBERT-19588 chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Before going back in time, Harry should have getting all the Lottery numbers in the Muggle World.
AloofEyeball chapter 2 . 6/3/2018
The mechanics of time travel don't seem to be well laid out. The first chapter seemed to indicate that nobody could go with Harry to the past and that, by going to the past, he was leaving everyone else to live out their lives in the world he left behind. Chapter two now suggests that he could have brought others with him (like Kreacher) and that his meddling would affect the lives of the people he left behind (like Teddy). If the latter two are true, it seems like Harry probably would have done something different, at least offering to take his friends with him, when preparing for time travel.
Old Herobrine chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
Way too much exposition in the first eight paragraphs. It did not hook me as I hoped.

Change some of the exposition to short snippet interactions between old harry and other characters who might show (not tell!) some of the reasons why he is leaving.
RinnaZevran1987 chapter 6 . 5/1/2018
Love It.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/25/2018
Great story!
luramos chapter 6 . 4/14/2018
Adorei , bem original!
scyfly chapter 6 . 3/26/2018
nice story
Rogue Survivor chapter 1 . 3/22/2018
Those 'marriage laws' make no sense. Why would they sully their pure blood with those of lesser blood?
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