Reviews for The Magus Sister
TurtleChix chapter 3 . 10/20
Hope you get to making more chapters. :)
Guest chapter 35 . 3/30
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
Zae chapter 34 . 2/27
Great chapter on the Magus sister,so can you please put up the next chapters
Gargoyle77 chapter 34 . 12/21/2015
I enjoy your writing. It's not like your not putting effort into it, whether it be the added dialogue, or in describing the details. As a fan of the show, and having watched it way too many times (in my families opinion. lol) I can picture what everything looks like in my head when reading your story, and not just because I watched the show. This is what I enjoy about this story! well, that, and I love Brooklyn. Lols
Gargoyle77 chapter 35 . 12/21/2015
Please, please, PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story!
Goldspark1 chapter 31 . 9/27/2015
Thanks for not making it to easy to solve the problem. And it makes sense that she is not as great a wizard yet as her brother. Shows she can grow.

This was in my opinion, the darkest episodes of the story. People actually died.
Goldspark1 chapter 28 . 9/26/2015
Now this was my favorite episode. The part where their roles are reversed. Hope Zaus had some pictures of when she turned into a Gargoyle.
Goldspark1 chapter 25 . 9/26/2015
I forgot to say this in my last review.

Please don't make it completely obvious that Zaus has feelings for Brooklyn. And vise versa. I want it to be subtle. Like when they huddled together when they went flying. Now subtly is gone and feels like its slapping me in the face.
Goldspark1 chapter 25 . 9/26/2015
This was a good chapter. Finally you address that she is just a freeloader living off a friend. And now she wants to change that. Personally, I think she should change her job so she can go to work at day so she can help her friends at night. Also, not to have any ties with Zanatos. I am certain Zanatos values favors more than money and this is a good way to hold something over Zaus.
Goldspark1 chapter 24 . 9/26/2015
I have a comment. I understand practicing a spell can make it easier to use, more efficient, and quicker to activate. But please remember that this does still require the same amount of energy to do the spell. Owen said it himself that magic is energy and even the strongest spell casters have a limit. For example, when Zanatos fought Oberon, he was able to repel, drain, and force him around his defenses because he did not have enough energy to break the generators.
Ookamigyru1985 chapter 35 . 9/22/2015
This is amazing! I love the romance between Brooklyn and Zeus, I enjoy how you are incorporating her into the story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Musical Ninja chapter 35 . 9/12/2015
Nice job with the Mutates in this chapter :) I love how you changed the story to fit the extra character :) I also like the relationship between Brooklyn and Zaus :)
Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 35 . 9/11/2015
Aw this is was a sweet and tense chapter. I always felt sorry for Maggie for what happened to her but at least she has Talon to support her. And Elisa got to see her brother again. Excellent work on this chapter and I can't wait to find out what happens next. Keep up the excellent work. :D
Vigatus chapter 35 . 9/8/2015
Thanks for updating.
jozs001 chapter 35 . 9/4/2015
Awesome and very well written as always :) Update soon!
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