Reviews for What Hurts the Most
Brennason chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
Oh god that was heartbreaking. You weren't supposed to make me cry with 700 words!
IAmThePokemonprincess chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Let me get this straight! Your writing is good but other than at the start you can't even tell who's thinking! Yet you say I'm a bad writer!
MysteryPaleoWhateverGeek chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Good stuff.
DracoBlitzen chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Aww... That's so sad. I listened to What Hurts The Most while reading this piece. Kinda reminds me of my fic "Memories Far", but who am I to judge?
NY514 chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
God that SUCKED
CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
So sad.
C'sMelody chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Geez, I just felt like crying my eyes out T.T

Honestly, I just wanted shake him until he said it loud and clear. T.T

I just think you should try to describe more the way he felt.

But well done, though.

I'll go now cry somewhere else T.T

C'sMelody
Ally147 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Maybe you should write more angsty stuff, you're quite good at it (whether or not that's a good or bad thing is completely up to you!). Good stuff anyway :) Happy holidays!