|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Witch Queen|
| GroveWolf chapter 16 . 1/25
I went back and re-read the encounter with Luna, and didn't see where she took his wand and knife, but then she has it?
So Luna is eternally reborn to herself? is this your idea or does it have a source?
What do you mean this is the ending you had in mind? a vague ending? with nothing resolved?
| GroveWolf chapter 15 . 1/25
So has the years changed? is there going to be eight years of Hogwarts? because Harry's birthday is during the summer, he'd be seventeen in his seventh year and then would only turn eighteen after he graduated, and Hermione would turn eighteen during the year.
The whole different emotions going on throughout the ritual got confusing after a bit.
| GroveWolf chapter 14 . 1/25
Was the potions book something that was mentioned by Harry that we didn't hear, during his explanation to Dumbledore?
I am interested in what making Hermione mixed-race does for this story. were we supposed to assume that Hermione's mother is black because of Hermione's frizzy hair? that's not great, if so. because plenty of white people can have frizzy hair. So I hope this isn't simply the author intending to be clever by 'noticing' something and extrapolating.
| GroveWolf chapter 12 . 1/25
So he doesn't remember Luna? but didn't he remember her earlier? when he told Hermione about her killing his wife. so why not now? did Hermione do something when they had the mental connection?
Also, I notice that some parts, that are where a character is thinking or reflecting can take a while, and tend to drag on. feeling dull, and I want to rush through them.
| GroveWolf chapter 5 . 1/24
I agree with Harry that that was inappropriate to explain to Hermione her past at this time, and in that way. Also, I believe I've read this before, but the order was different. I definitely feel the order was wrong. why are we having a flashback? why not just have the order is it happened? the back and forth makes no sense.
| Aselo chapter 17 . 11/13/2022
Lol next chapter huh?
| Aselo chapter 8 . 11/13/2022
I hope his weakness goes away soon
| ReneeEAD chapter 1 . 9/11/2022
Awesome job so far! Hope you’re in a place to continue sometime in the future but regardless, thanks for all the effort you’ve already shared with us!
| Bluenait chapter 1 . 8/15/2022
yeahh waht is the fucking use to send him back but with squb like powers waht a bullshit fic so fuck this
| acetwolf94 chapter 17 . 3/4/2022
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
| axell chapter 1 . 2/23/2022
Is it an abandoned work or does the author keep updating?
| NonsensicalRants chapter 11 . 1/18/2022
Even with the arguement presented here any claims that wizarding society has ever been less gender equal than muggle society is absurd.
A) The fact that even during this "horrible past" Hermione can find complaints and aired greivances but she clearly didn't find similar complaining from the men in the EXACT same position(Muhammad himself was a child bride to a disturbingly older woman who was also his mentor. This was just as common as the reverse) and she is projecting her own sexism against men, her own inability to feel any empathy for the suffering of these men forced into marriages as well.
B) The fact that wizarding society actually holds women responsible for their crimes and mistakes, unlike any muggle society in history. In real life Bellatrix lestesnge would never have spent a day behind bars. She would have been treated like the Manson girls.
C) That yes, magic is the great equalizer. God made man and woman. Smith and Wesson made them equal. Ignoring the preposterous claim that any government would want to specifically disarm women(arguement against gun control policies pushee by political parties known for rampant sexual abuse of women and that guns prevent countless rapes every year aside) is preposterous as well. But the fact the magical world has an armed citizenry would prevent that yes, it would also prevent absolutely any form of tyranny in real life.
You have issues to work out. Lies you were told about history, especially in regards to women. They were never pathetic sub humans capable of being oppressed. And the men in their lives were never monsters capable of oppressing them. It biggles the mind how somebody can rant about protecting or defending women in the same breath as they portray them as inferior to men in every way. Which you would have to believe to even entertain the notions of past oppression of women
| I await a guardian chapter 17 . 12/20/2021
All I can say is I'm curious for this to continue...
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2021
Give my support to a writer who can't finish a story in 8 years!
Nope if you don't take it that seriously why should I?
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/2/2021
Interesting premise. Needs a bit of brit picking with the character dialogue, other wise it's a story with a solid plot but the characterization of the golden trio and Neville seems a bit off . 6.5/10 , keep on practicing and I'm sure your stories will become brilliant works