wonderful story, thanks for what you have posted so far.

wow, how heavy. hard to preach morality about not killing when the alternative option is risking your life and allowing the enemy to get the chance to get you. it is hard to say that anybody can stay neutral in a war. staying neutral is mostly siding with the winning side and condemning the oppressed.

Agree with Luna's Mews' comment. This reads like disney-fied story, but more subtle.

First,
Best regards

This is one of the best stories I've ever read, with a lot of theory about magic, something I really enjoy...

I hope one day you continue it

I guess I'll have to go to AO3, see if that's where the story continues, although I really don't like ao3... Anyway

... I don't have Tumblr either... But hey, I guess I could take a look

Anyway, thanks for the great story
Good luck, bye

An entertaining story, I do regularly enjoy !SuperHermione stories, and I really enjoyed the amount of Magical theory you developed, didn't love Harry being a squib through almost all that you wrote, think it would have been just as well if he was merely not !SuperHarry.

I am finding it unlikely this story will ever continue considering how long it has been now without you updating anything you work on, I shall only say that by this point it seems fairly clear to me that the people who have been attacking Harry and warning him off have been Elves/Fae of some kind that are aware of the future and want their Witch Queen to return.

Ok, I know that you're probably tired of hearing this, if you take this long to finish writing and uploading most chapters, but considering it's been 2 years, well, let's just say you deserve to be nagged about continuing the story. By that I mean that I love this story and want it to continue, although I unfortunately don't have excess money to donate to the cause unfortunately, let alone money at all, but oh well, the point is, a few authors (at least 1 or 2) I've reviewed, apparently didn't like being reminded that they should continue writing the story in question, or that people would read said story, and told me as much, their reasoning being that they, more or less, hear that people liked the story, too many times, and apparently don't perform tricks (writing) on command, and I'm truly sorry if my begging I sometimes do, sounds like that, because I don't mean it to...

All that doesn't change the fact though, that I'd love to read more of this story. Of course, I've seen authors who don't update their stories, because they have their own website, or have stories with multiple versions, like for instance, the X rated versions on Ao3 and censored versions on fanfiction, and even in some cases better edited versions on other sites, such as Ao3, and hosting copies with less editing and beating work on fanfiction too, so, I hope you aren't one of those in that last category.

All of this is besides the point though, which is that I honestly love this story, despite the last chapter being so "flashback-ey". I mean, I know that he was telling Hermione about the future, (or previous-future? Whatever!) But both then, and earlier in the story at certain places, there was memories of the past/future that felt like a big non-sequitur. Like for instance, say you saved a cat from a burning house or tree, or what-have-you, THEN just go off on some tangent about the past/future without explaining how the cat in the house or tree led to that reviewing of the past, or like, if you end a chapter on a cliffhanger, that has NOTHING to do with the past/future, yet in the beginning of the next chapter, half of it is at the main character's point of view, and talking about something from the past, when the main character is the one we was involved in the cliffhanger. It's like, all of a sudden it's a few hours, or days, or weeks, later, yet all of a sudden, with no explanation, they're in the middle of a memory session in the beginning of the next chapter, with no visible clue as to how they got there...

I will be following this story just in case you decide to work on it again, and I'd like to finish by saying, thank you for your work on this story so far... also, I don't know if you will ever finish this story, but it's definitely good enough so far, to warrant a favorite as well

I went back and re-read the encounter with Luna, and didn't see where she took his wand and knife, but then she has it?
So Luna is eternally reborn to herself? is this your idea or does it have a source?
What do you mean this is the ending you had in mind? a vague ending? with nothing resolved?

So has the years changed? is there going to be eight years of Hogwarts? because Harry's birthday is during the summer, he'd be seventeen in his seventh year and then would only turn eighteen after he graduated, and Hermione would turn eighteen during the year.
The whole different emotions going on throughout the ritual got confusing after a bit.

Was the potions book something that was mentioned by Harry that we didn't hear, during his explanation to Dumbledore?
I am interested in what making Hermione mixed-race does for this story. were we supposed to assume that Hermione's mother is black because of Hermione's frizzy hair? that's not great, if so. because plenty of white people can have frizzy hair. So I hope this isn't simply the author intending to be clever by 'noticing' something and extrapolating.

So he doesn't remember Luna? but didn't he remember her earlier? when he told Hermione about her killing his wife. so why not now? did Hermione do something when they had the mental connection?
Also, I notice that some parts, that are where a character is thinking or reflecting can take a while, and tend to drag on. feeling dull, and I want to rush through them.

I agree with Harry that that was inappropriate to explain to Hermione her past at this time, and in that way. Also, I believe I've read this before, but the order was different. I definitely feel the order was wrong. why are we having a flashback? why not just have the order is it happened? the back and forth makes no sense.

Lol next chapter huh?

I hope his weakness goes away soon

Awesome job so far! Hope you’re in a place to continue sometime in the future but regardless, thanks for all the effort you’ve already shared with us!

yeahh waht is the fucking use to send him back but with squb like powers waht a bullshit fic so fuck this