|Reviews for Afraid|
| Hoplite39 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
That was a very passionate and emotional piece about Kelly. It really did feel genuine, touching and authentic. You can almost see the tears dripping on the page as she writes it. I can just imagine her feeling and thinking that way. And it makes me wish that she could get her wish.
| Gabrielle Henson chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Very cute and bittersweet.
I really like Kelly as a character and it's not that often that someone writes about her, let alone write something feeling so close to how the Kelly in my own playthrough would think and act.
Thanks for sharing.
| Don't Mess With Aria chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
This is lovely. I don't even normally like Kelly, but what you've done here, you really made me feel for her. Beautiful prose, SPAG is excellent, the only thing I noticed was a line near the end, "kinds of company you run it..." I think you want "with" rather than "it." Overall, excellent piece.