Reviews for Lion Unity
TheHypers chapter 53 . 10/31/2014
Wonderful! *claps along*
TheHypers chapter 52 . 10/31/2014
TheHypers chapter 51 . 10/31/2014
I have a bad feelng about this...
TheHypers chapter 50 . 10/30/2014
No worries; I didn't even notice :P

And this chapter was very nice. I couldn't help wondering if Luna was making some sort of allegory with the books not being read very often; maybe she's referring to herself? Well, interesting chapter, and I loved the Harry/Hermione moment at the end. And on how Hermione's three weeks ahead on all her classes - gosh, I'm so jealous :P I wish I could be like that at school :P

TheHypers chapter 49 . 10/30/2014
Nice chapter, only this kind of kills the mood for further Remus/Tonks shipping later on, and I did so love that pairing...but nice work!
TheHypers chapter 48 . 10/27/2014
Aww, this was sad. Charity didn't deserve Remus to full on walk out from her like that :( I hope they reconcile, and I have a feeling Charity's going to be one that sees past the wizarding world's prejudices.

I really liked the dialogue between Angelina and Katie, and I loved how they figured out a way to make it all work. I can't wait to see the Ravenclaw girls get what they deserve!
ninja bunny go chapter 63 . 10/12/2014
Great story :) havent read a story in a while that heald my attention for 63 chapters. Hope to see a email in my inbox about a new chapter soon :).
Narcissa-Weasly chapter 63 . 10/10/2014
Such a sad end of an otherwise happy chapter, from now everything will only become worse.
BlazeStryker chapter 61 . 10/9/2014
A good name for a bee: I'd go with Buzzi but a confused house elf might show up.
TheHypers chapter 47 . 10/2/2014
TheHypers chapter 46 . 10/2/2014
Is Penelope going to brew it and somehow slip it into Luna's drink?
TheHypers chapter 45 . 10/2/2014
Wow, that last letter...the feels...

So that was what Oliver was reading back to back? With that beastly letter from Joseph Summers, and that letter from his mother. It seems he has a very tough life.

I think it's interesting that the twins know, and I'm keen to see what they do with that knowledge. And I'm also curious about their prank on Snape, I hope it's worthwhile.

TheHypers chapter 44 . 10/2/2014
Good chapter, interesting interaction between the teachers and there was one error in the very last line of this fic. (which was probably why I spotted it)

THe line is: Was there ever a time when he could an argument without any sort of compromise?

I think there should be some kind of verb between 'he' and 'could', that's all.

TheHypers chapter 43 . 10/2/2014
Yes! Thank you! This chapter hit me at the right place. I wish James Potter would've got this kind of treatment though...

Thehypers chapter 42 . 10/2/2014
'more handsome twin to cheer him up' - I thought Fred and George were identical twins? And even if it were for that little tuft of hair, it still wouldn't be a big enough difference to determine who's handsomer or not.

Awesome chapter, and yeah I think I see a bit of Charity/Remus :)

A few things I liked this chapter were: Lupin and the twins conversation (it felt very realistic and like Lupin was speaking from experience) and Oliver's internal dialogue at the end. Great job!

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