What does mother nature look like? The first time you said she was invisible and you haven't described her since. Or did I miss it?

Is it bad that my smile gets wider as you mention how it's just going to get worse...?

I was thinking for groundhog - more the quirky family pet.

You are an amazing writer. Keep up the great work.

Ooohhhh diosssss you have no idea how I cried, I completly loved it

Oh. My. God! This took a long time to finish! I could barely stop, I was reading with every spare moment I had. So totally worth it. I absolutely love this story. So many amazing things! The OCs you created were wonderful. I loved the relationships everyone had with each other. The Bennetts, the Guardians, the Season Spirits, the Lieutenants, all of them, perfection. And that ending! OMG yes!
I'm not ready to leave this universe yet, so I'm off to read the other stories. But I have one last thing to say; Thank you so much for writing this beautiful masterpiece!

I've read this story three times over the past few years. I love it and love the thoughts written down in it. Thank you

Seeing how smart and good a kid Jamie is actually makes me feel a bit... well, guilty and inept. I have a bad habit of not trusting people, especially since they seem to love taunting me so I yell, glare, and curse at them in an attempt to make them leave me alone. Other times I ignore them all together, like they don't exist and they're just air. I'm also not very smart, or good with words, and by that I mean I can say things that don't make ANY sense and just make me look like an idiot. I COULD be smart if I wanted, but my problem is studying, memorization, the hatred I have for science/biology/math, and the fact that I utterly FAIL at those three subjects unless it's certain things that I've memorized(which isn't very often). Not to mention, I am not exactly light weight nor fond of exercise, and while I am not obese, I do hope to get to a point of where I can exercise without having to be in fear of being attacked by bees, wasps, hornets, and other stinging insectile abominations. I hope to get smarter, get a good paying job, my own house(although I don't know where I will live, since I have found myself to be possessive of my current land/location owned by my grandma where me, my mom, and she live), a husband who won't cheat on me and loves me unconditionally as I do him(and brings out more of my emotions, because I always feel like I am missing something in life), and lots of children... no joke, LOTS of children. I want more than four or five, which is insane. But anyway, yeah, I wish I could restart my child hood off better. Like it would restart in 2017 or 2020, I just wish I could do that. I love my family(my dad passed when I was thirteen) but ever since my dad died, nothing has been the same. I just feel like I'm missing something in my life. Sorry for the rant, just felt I had to get it out. I had a bit more, but I felt it was best to stop here. I'm sure that if I TRY, I can achieve something, after all I'm still young but I feel like a failure, since I was supposed to graduate last year but because of a mishap in Kindergarten where my idiotic child self conveniently forgot all the 'important' information like my address, birthday, and stuff like that, the teachers deemed me stupid and held me back.

I can't tell if the slab is just engraved with a very detailed picture with words beneath it or if it's like, you know, 3D, where the whole scene is literally carved out kind of like a statue sitting on a slab with words. I think the first one though.

How old is he when he died? Appearance wise, he looks 14-17.

This is the third time I'm reading this story chapter by chapter... 'Nuff said. _

I'm crying so hard at the Emily reunion. The way you handled this story was so perfect. I read it nonstop for 2 1/2 days.

Od course it is obvious who they are. You gave quite a lot of hints from "how to train your dragon". Its totally going to be funny to see those two in action. In a world that they couldnt of come up with even in their wildest imaginations. Haha! The chapter was good. And i really liked it. Its sad that those fanatics cant understand that their actions are pointless and they are killing innocent people.

Whoohoo! Nice chaptrer! Although i was saddened by elizabeths death , i understood it was an inevitable outcome. Sooner or later someone would have to die, if only for the shake of the story. I rewally liked the fact that jack finally went public about being J. Overland and saying some other things which we didnt know before. I find it quite cute that the charity organization of his has his sisters name. Its a very nice and delicate detail. Now, lets see what awaits at the next chapter... Shall we, my friend?

Niiiceee... I liked it. And the ending was quite intriguing. All in all it was a very good chapter.