Reviews for Secret of Frost and Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this entire story but this chapter is my absolute FAVORITE! It makes me smile EVERY TIME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Second read of this story and I'm a goddamn waterfountain over here... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omgosh he’s a constellation now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I freaking knew it. Omgosh I knew that you were going to bring in HTTYD with this. I am so happy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, a bit confused here. One moment Pitch is fine and enjoying the sun and next he's screaming in agony? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just realized something . . . . . . THE LUNAR LAMAS ARE PRACTICALLY THE LITTLE GREEN ALIENS FROM TOY STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anyone else listen to "Valley of the Shadow" from Little Women while reading this? I did. And I cried 10x as much than normal. WAHHHHHHHHH! x"( x"( x"( |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it wrong that I imagine winter sprites as porgs? |
![]() ![]() And to think this would have never happened is a child hadn't died. |
![]() ![]() Not that you're keyword description is bad, by any means, I just had a hell of a time finding this on google. I actually had to go through ffns rotg fanfic page and go through the most popular ones page by page. Im hopping including keywords will give me an easier time with google...speaking of which... Keywords: Jack's sister believes |
![]() ![]() I've been looking for this fanfic for MONTHS! In case I lose it AGAIN... Keywords: Jack's sister believes ROTG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um, The HanYuPinYin should be Xue Hu, with the thingy you did with the "e" on the "u" as well. The Chinese characters would be 雪虎 in Simplified Ver. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was re-reading this, and two things gave away that you aren't from the USA. 1st, we don't have Boxing day. Someone had to explain what it was to me years ago. Second, in the US, an Amber Alert means a missing child, named after a kid who was kidnapped and then died. But this story is amazing, and I love reading it once in a while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy this story, and have re-read it multiple times. As such, I have spotted a continuity issue. I'm only pointing it out because if it was me, I would want to know. In this chapter you mentioned that Jack wears shorts. In a later chapter, you make a big deal about Jack having to take off his pants, stating that he's never taken them off before. This is a huge story with so many ideas woven together, it really is spectacular. It's no wonder that something slipped through the cracks. I enjoy your work, thank you. TTFN |