Reviews for Broken Shadows |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you say here he lost his wand yet kakashi saw him use it aginst the demon bros this is a very good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I love this story I mean it's packed with everything. I hope you keep writing this I just can't get enough |
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![]() ![]() I LOVVVE IT KEEP WRITING PLZ |
![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so chaotic and hilarious! I love it! Very sad it was never finished. |
![]() ![]() ...Why would OTHER villages be able to say who gets promoted? Suggestions/comments, sure, but not total control. That sounds like a really easy way to sabotage other villages without seeming to. Though it does seem like it's half prank, half 'are you really believing this line' test. Like the whole tenth question scare tactic. |
![]() ![]() A poisonous snake? Not venomous? Though given 'magical snake' it wouldn't surprise me if a Basilisk ended up being both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A brilliant story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It fills me with disappointment thatsuch a beautifully written story is incomplete, i deeply enjoyed reading all 22 chapters and truely wish the writer the best. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story XD |
![]() ![]() ABSOLUTELY Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() too bad this isn't finished. kekek |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally, I'm not really a fan of the trope where the Shinobi exist in the same world with whatever franchise they're being crossed over with in a fic. In terms of worldbuilding, it creates so many conflicts and it doesn't even add anything new or worthwhile. At least with an isekai you don't have to drive yourself ragged trying to think of a way to justify everything. Honestly, the only reason why I would consider this story a good read is because of the following: decent humor, engaging character interactions, and the noticeable lack of super edginess and angst that's quite common in Naruto and/or Harry Potter fanfics. |
![]() ![]() I LOVVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ |